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Journey Through the Sahara

Is our bliss a desert storm or did the camel spit? — quote by author JOURNEY THROUGH THE SAHARA camel with two humps love’s staggering lumps our wedded trip, high sun spits in each eye 3/21/2022 Form J - Just Write Me a New Poem Sponsor: Constance La France

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Debra L Brown

Date: 3/27/2022 7:03:00 AM

Back to say Congratulations! Kim, on your win. Outstanding poem. Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2022 2:20:00 PM

Thank you, Debra!

Constance La France

Date: 3/26/2022 6:50:00 PM

Kim, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful and I like your quote too ~Constance

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2022 7:21:00 PM

Thank you, Constance ~ K8m

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/25/2022 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun write. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2022 11:06:00 AM

Thank you, Paula!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/24/2022 9:39:00 PM

"Sun spits in each eye" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2022 7:54:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj!

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/22/2022 9:06:00 PM

Wildly original, Kim! Great poem picture! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2022 5:52:00 AM

Thank you, Laura! I appreciate!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/22/2022 2:19:00 AM

My friend, you have a knack for originality. Best for a win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2022 6:23:00 AM

Thank you, Victor! I appreciate that! :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/21/2022 10:46:00 PM

Wow, great entry Kim, Short poem, straight to the point.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2022 6:23:00 AM

Thank you, Harry! :)

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/21/2022 4:59:00 PM

Hi, Kim, I enjoyed your poem, I like the last line. How you refer to the sun spiting in your eye. Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2022 8:03:00 PM

Thank you, Debra!

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/21/2022 4:16:00 PM

Kim, you've written an excellent poem. I like it, and you did a fantastic job of capturing a gorgeous image between the camel in the desert and the sun's piercing rays. best wishes in the contest

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2022 4:33:00 PM

Thank you, Sotto!

Silent One

Date: 3/21/2022 2:24:00 PM

Interesting form..not one I've done before.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2022 2:45:00 PM

Hope you liked. Check out the form and try one. Looking it up further, gives you more details.