Kim Rodrigues Poet Jueju

Journey Through the Sahara

Is our bliss a desert storm or did the camel spit?

             — quote by author

JOURNEY THROUGH THE SAHARA

camel with two humps
love’s staggering lumps
our wedded trip, high
sun spits in each eye

3/21/2022
Form J - Just Write Me a New Poem
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Debra L Brown March 27, 2022 at 7:03 AM Back to say Congratulations! Kim, on your win. Outstanding poem. Blessings ~ Debra Kim Rodrigues March 27, 2022 at 2:20 PM Thank you, Debra!

Constance La France March 26, 2022 at 6:50 PM Kim, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful and I like your quote too ~Constance Kim Rodrigues March 26, 2022 at 7:21 PM Thank you, Constance ~ K8m

Paula Goldsmith March 25, 2022 at 9:22 AM Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun write. Have a blessed day with your win............... Kim Rodrigues March 25, 2022 at 11:06 AM Thank you, Paula!

Christuraj Alex March 24, 2022 at 9:39 PM "Sun spits in each eye" - Beautifully written. Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues March 25, 2022 at 7:54 AM Thank you, Christuraj!

Laura Leiser March 22, 2022 at 9:06 PM Wildly original, Kim! Great poem picture! :) Kim Rodrigues March 23, 2022 at 5:52 AM Thank you, Laura! I appreciate!

Victor Buhagiar March 22, 2022 at 2:19 AM My friend, you have a knack for originality. Best for a win. Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2022 at 6:23 AM Thank you, Victor! I appreciate that! :)

Harry Horsman March 21, 2022 at 10:46 PM Wow, great entry Kim, Short poem, straight to the point. Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2022 at 6:23 AM Thank you, Harry! :)

Debra L Brown March 21, 2022 at 4:59 PM Hi, Kim, I enjoyed your poem, I like the last line. How you refer to the sun spiting in your eye. Blessings ~ Debra Kim Rodrigues March 21, 2022 at 8:03 PM Thank you, Debra!

Sotto Poet March 21, 2022 at 4:16 PM Kim, you've written an excellent poem. I like it, and you did a fantastic job of capturing a gorgeous image between the camel in the desert and the sun's piercing rays. best wishes in the contest Kim Rodrigues March 21, 2022 at 4:33 PM Thank you, Sotto!

Silent One March 21, 2022 at 2:24 PM Interesting form..not one I've done before. Kim Rodrigues March 21, 2022 at 2:45 PM Hope you liked. Check out the form and try one. Looking it up further, gives you more details.