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Journey of Joy---Tails

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when broken memory
drowned under chrome
of new moon,
revered rune fed 
her hungry joy…
cheer nodded on porch door;
oh, ounce of hope
poured word of good omen…
let there be joy!



Nikko’s HEADS OR TAILS Contest
By nette onclaud

hopelifewarfree verse

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J. Dover

February 1, 2012 at 8:27 PM

CONGRATS! I knew you'd make it far, this was just too good :D Love, J.

Dalila Agtani

January 31, 2012 at 10:51 PM

You amazed me with your poetic prowess Nette. Congratulations on your win! I struggled doing my piece but I made it alright. Love Dalila

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

January 31, 2012 at 7:53 PM

Nette-This is brilliant! Many congrats. to you :)

Maureen Lefanue

January 31, 2012 at 3:07 PM

Congratulations, Nette, on your win! Luv, Maureen

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 31, 2012 at 12:58 PM

Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Greg Stanley

January 31, 2012 at 11:17 AM

Nette, you did a wonderf ul job on this one, congratulations on your fantastic win, Greg

Kash Poet

January 31, 2012 at 11:06 AM

A big hoorrayyy for u Nette.See below I told you it is a chart topper.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 31, 2012 at 10:57 AM

This was another poem that wowed me, nette! Awesome how you still brought on your talent for imagery in this very touching write! and I loved how you ended this, very memorable! And hmm about your prize, haha, how's that?? I had Philippine coins in mind lol....It's either you pass on your prize OR I will see what other token I can think of ;) super duper congrats to you! :D

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 31, 2012 at 10:38 AM

Good one like it congratulations Nette x

J. Dover

January 13, 2012 at 6:55 PM

Great poem, Nette! You're amazing! Good luck in the contest as well :) Thanks for your help <3 Love, J.

Black Eyed Susan

January 10, 2012 at 7:01 AM

I don't know how you did this. You make it look so simple! was it? good luck in the contest :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 10, 2012 at 2:29 AM

Great job...I struggled writing for this one. But it was fun. Good luck in the contest.

M.I.A .

January 9, 2012 at 6:13 PM

wow! left me speechless, good luck on the contest nette, a winner for me. and just want to wish you a happy birthday (sorry a bit belated). all the best wishes hun :)

Joe Maverick

January 9, 2012 at 1:59 PM

I think you have posted a well crafted write here Nette,, and i see there were letters you could not use..) all the best..

Russell Sivey

January 9, 2012 at 11:38 AM

Fantastic write Nette, I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! You completed this poem masterfully, I am impressed of your avoidance of the "forbidden" letters! You wrote an awesome poem with your allowed letters, I really like it!! Awesome Work!!

Cyndi Macmillan

January 9, 2012 at 11:06 AM

WOWSER! I smell gold, here, Nette! Loved this tribute . This is so sophisticated, the weaving of rhyme (memory/ebony/journey and chrome/home) poignant and deep. Sure to do well. HAPPY BIRTHDAY. PS... SOUP MAIL, DEAR!