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Journey

We etch out words in cyber space
 Which travel at the speed of light
 The thoughts we leave within this place
 Will journey through distant gigabytes

 And in some dusty village far
 Where cyberspace sparks desire
 Our words like twinkling distant stars
 Will be able to inspire

 So leave your words and let  them shine
 As it travels this digital universe
 And soon their gleam will be defined
 As inspiration they disperse

 9/3/2017
  'J'' Contest, New Or Old Poetry Contest
  Sponsor: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Joseph, excellent and congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this beautiful poem, well done and I like your chosen image also ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Alex Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 8:06 PM
"So leave your words and let them shine As it travels this digital universe" Beautifully Written. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 3:25 AM
First the whole planet was lit up, then we lit up cyberspace at the speed of light! Congratulations, Joseph!
Daniel Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 1:15 AM
A lovely poem on the journey of our words, Joseph, congratulations:)
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 3:21 PM
Back again four years later with Congrats on your journey themed poem . Great entry!
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 8:18 PM
SO inspirational, Joseph. It was really nice to be able to find this one of yours I had not seen yet.
Muideen Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:30 PM
Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful this poem is. Thanks for posting.
Daniel Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 10:00 AM
Inspiring indeed, Joseph:)
Warrior Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:35 AM
A spaced out read my friend...happy gigabyting lol...another final frontier...god bless...^WW^
Roper Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 9:50 PM
Nicely done , Joseph, I will my words :) Hugs Eve ~`*
Y. Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:42 PM
Hi Joseph, I really enjoyed this "Cyberspace " journey. I agree with Nette, it was out of this world:-) Alexis
May Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:51 PM
Thank you Alexis
Onclaud Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 12:30 PM
jospeh, way out of this world... such a multi-dimensional artpiece..huggs
May Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:51 PM
Thank you Nette
Onclaud Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 12:31 PM
* joseph*
Vaso Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 10:22 PM
Loved this write, and this also for some reason reminds me of Star Trek!
May Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Arthur...beam me up..lol
Sands Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 4:30 PM
This poem is inspiring and a joy to read Joseph. Saving it to read again later :)
May Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 4:49 PM
Thank you Heidi..glad you liked it
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