Unseeking Seeker Poet Ottava rima

Journey

"In tranquil silence, let's journey within ~
Following the scent of love, just begin"
~ quote by poet


Having an innate urge to feel contrast,
and noticing heart from head stood apart,
we journeyed thereto, without being asked,
whereupon when we added love to cart,
fears receded and thus whence die was cast,
suffused with bliss mists, soul's God search did start.
This journey without movement beauteous,
took us to heaven's very nucleus.

06-March-2023
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Writing Challenge - ''J'' Words - Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Constance La France

HMS, Rhymezone, PS Grammar

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Constance La France April 3, 2023 at 4:00 PM Seeker, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Unseeking Seeker April 4, 2023 at 6:02 AM Thanks for the opportunity!

Sotto Poet March 9, 2023 at 7:45 PM Congratulations on your contest win with this wonderful poem, Seeker. Blessings. Unseeking Seeker March 9, 2023 at 8:06 PM Thank you, dear SP

Linda Alice Fowler March 9, 2023 at 1:21 PM Wow - expressive and exquisite. Congratulations on your win! :) Unseeking Seeker March 9, 2023 at 6:08 PM Thank you dear Linda :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 10:11 AM - Congratulations on your win ... lovely written ... the quote is excellent :) - hugs Unseeking Seeker March 9, 2023 at 6:08 PM Thank you, Sunshine!

Beryl Edmonds March 6, 2023 at 1:27 AM Wonderful words in the Ottava rima from Anne-Lise, love the quote too. Best wishes ~ Belle Unseeking Seeker March 6, 2023 at 1:51 AM Thank you, Belle