John Doe

The chase after door was ajar. From window to window, that far. The buzz in my ear, The fly needs to fear. The whiz of my swatter on par. “I’m hit,” says the fly, out of steam. Is it truly dead or a scheme? Over and over… its eyes ice over. I suck up the fly with air stream. Dear Dad, you’ll be happy to know the fly you let in, had to go The show he put on - Its buzz, it is gone. It's buried in the bag - a John Doe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 8:51 PM
Got another laff from this one tonite, Brenda... Starr, remember. ~ Auntie Quated
Rodrigues Avatar
July 9, 2025 at 7:26 AM
LOL! Glad you got the reference. Even a star reporter has to swat flies!
Wolf Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 7:39 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. ~ Anonymous
Rodrigues Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 8:46 AM
Thanks for the laugh…lol
Brotherton Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 7:54 PM
Such a cute limerick, Kim. For some reason it brings me memories of that old Micky Mouse cartoon where the "Brave Little Tailor" got seven in one blow.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 8:07 PM
LOL! Thank you, Jerry!
Hind Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 10:19 AM
Hmmm, what a cool Limerick! You make even this an art, Kim. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 10:42 AM
LOL! Took me a while to get my head around limericks. They are not as hard to write after practicing for so long. :) Hugs
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