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His frost bitten nose, Scarlet like blood, His blanket a cardboard box, Under the ledge, He sought shelter, But luck with him was not. A velvet cap scarce with pennies, Guilt ridden coins, For all were cut with careless greed, And intentions good were not. His heart heavy and eyes longing, Cast across the sky A final hour, A final wish, A meal for the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/27/2013 4:08:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem today. Very astute piece of wording. Captured the scene so well, love the line Guilt ridden coins, for all were cut with careless greed. Well done.
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Date: 4/7/2013 5:02:00 AM
sad write,lovely done,the life of the homeless,enjoy reading Maria
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Date: 11/27/2012 4:07:00 PM
Hi Maria, this is a very nice read. Thanks for sharing.
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Maria Liu
Date: 11/28/2012 10:47:00 AM
Thank you very much :)

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