Jodi Revised

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How can I express my sadness as I turn on CNN .
For the man who was suffering as he left so beautiful inside 

 taken so handsome and young ,  by the Sin of Pride .

His Family now weeps for a very long time , 
he has become all our true loves in mind.

For he a Charismatic man , intelligent, 
well spoken , a man so hard to find .

What has our World come to 
What drives one to insanity, 
 to take another so Horrifically~

The Truth does not Lie Jodi ,
 for you holds no Glory .

The Truth in rejection so sad to face,
    willing to give away everything at all cost..

No matter how much she Loved him , 
  In capable of love through possession , 
 
There is a lesson through the worst pain .
 Through incapable love lies ,  betrayal . 

You have taken another that was not yours to take , 
  You have caused great sorrow and pain
      Your love of self in Vain ~

Giving her freedom through the spirit "Death " 
        will not make the sad better .
           In justice , is a mirror and cell for eternity .

In my heart everyone deserves Redemption ,
 leaving this writing  only the title of her name  
   many would like you to suffer this life and the next .

In respect of the Man who has left , I believe he would forgive her
   refusing to punish by Death .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/10/2013 3:14:00 AM
I've never attempted an epitaph, good job Yvette with "Jodi"! MC
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Date: 8/10/2013 1:43:00 PM
I am curious , are you lost in happiness like I when you write !!
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Shanity Rain
Date: 8/10/2013 1:42:00 PM
well, I really thought about that as a " category " , epitaph ..and it is not mine to write , although , that is what came to mind . In this ..I do not want to offend . Thank-you my Friend :)
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