Jinu Turned Six

Jinu Turned Six


The house was decorated with balloons and buntings
Family cheered as Jinu turned six in the leap year gone by
Multiply it by four, but my Jinu remained glued to six
She lives away but her heart is here
I baked two cotton cheese cakes atop with apricot icing
For my friends at work and family at home
Placed it before her photograph and all blew out the candles
Little mementos for the children of friends
For Jinu was once a sweet buttercup like them
We remembered her growing up years and
Nostalgically went through the leaves of the album
Encrypted with her hairdo's and style trends
There were her happy smiling faces since she was a babe
Prancing around table tops and trees with Lucy her pet to
Her unforgettable winter marriage celebrations 
On a thick foggy night where some got lost enroute
Yet danced the night through to the rhythm of music
Memories of children churn up on birthday celebrations
By parents whose children remain in far away homes
Touché! Her seventh birthday is around the corner
Jinu turns seven and her baby will turn three!


January 28, 2016
Contest: Birthday Party
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 11, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Balveen, Congrats in Nayda's "Birthday Party win." Love LINDA
Cheema Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Thanks Linda!
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:34 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Balveen..
Cheema Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Thanks Upma!
Gentry Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 3:47 AM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed this!
Cheema Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 7:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed Suan! Thanks!
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Balveen, congratulations on your win! Leap year once every four years :( you really made me think ( feb. 29 or March 1st)
Cheema Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Feb 29! A few days more and she turns 7( not 28)! Thanks Eve! I sure enjoyed writing it!
Turner Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Lovely poem, Balveen. Congratulations on your prize winning write. In 5 years they can both celebrate their 8th birthday together.
Cheema Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 7:04 PM
In 5 years celebrating their 8th birthday-I like that Daniel! Thanks!
Johnson Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Congratulations on your poem and win. She should have some special parties since they are so few. Love, Joyce
Cheema Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 7:05 PM
I know! I'm preparing for one as she will be with me soon! Thanks Joyce!
Allison Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:36 PM
what a charming story Balveen must be strange to have a February 29th birthday. congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Cheema Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 7:07 PM
In fact, we all love it! It makes it so special!
Gorelick Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:27 PM
Funny story, congrats on your win. BG
Cheema Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 7:08 PM
Thanks Barbara!
Negron Flores Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Balveen
Cheema Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 4:37 AM
Thanks Nayda! It was so interesting!
Cheema Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Thanks Nayda! It was so interesting!
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Very lovely.. Gl in contest Balveen..
Cheema Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Thanks for your good wishes, upma!
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