Jinu Turned Six

Jinu Turned Six


The house was decorated with balloons and buntings
Family cheered as Jinu turned six in the leap year gone by
Multiply it by four, but my Jinu remained glued to six
She lives away but her heart is here
I baked two cotton cheese cakes atop with apricot icing
For my friends at work and family at home
Placed it before her photograph and all blew out the candles
Little mementos for the children of friends
For Jinu was once a sweet buttercup like them
We remembered her growing up years and
Nostalgically went through the leaves of the album
Encrypted with her hairdo's and style trends
There were her happy smiling faces since she was a babe
Prancing around table tops and trees with Lucy her pet to
Her unforgettable winter marriage celebrations 
On a thick foggy night where some got lost enroute
Yet danced the night through to the rhythm of music
Memories of children churn up on birthday celebrations
By parents whose children remain in far away homes
Touché! Her seventh birthday is around the corner
Jinu turns seven and her baby will turn three!


January 28, 2016
Contest: Birthday Party
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/11/2016 10:19:00 PM
Balveen, Congrats in Nayda's "Birthday Party win." Love LINDA
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 6:58:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 2/11/2016 4:34:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Balveen..
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 2/11/2016 3:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed this!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:00:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed Suan! Thanks!
Date: 2/10/2016 10:26:00 PM
Balveen, congratulations on your win! Leap year once every four years :( you really made me think ( feb. 29 or March 1st)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:02:00 PM
Feb 29! A few days more and she turns 7( not 28)! Thanks Eve! I sure enjoyed writing it!
Date: 2/10/2016 8:28:00 PM
Lovely poem, Balveen. Congratulations on your prize winning write. In 5 years they can both celebrate their 8th birthday together.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:04:00 PM
In 5 years celebrating their 8th birthday-I like that Daniel! Thanks!
Date: 2/10/2016 6:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem and win. She should have some special parties since they are so few. Love, Joyce
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:05:00 PM
I know! I'm preparing for one as she will be with me soon! Thanks Joyce!
Date: 2/10/2016 6:36:00 PM
what a charming story Balveen must be strange to have a February 29th birthday. congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:07:00 PM
In fact, we all love it! It makes it so special!
Date: 2/10/2016 5:27:00 PM
Funny story, congrats on your win. BG
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:08:00 PM
Thanks Barbara!
Date: 2/10/2016 5:25:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Balveen
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/15/2016 4:37:00 AM
Thanks Nayda! It was so interesting!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:09:00 PM
Thanks Nayda! It was so interesting!
Date: 1/28/2016 10:56:00 PM
Very lovely.. Gl in contest Balveen..
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/29/2016 9:40:00 PM
Thanks for your good wishes, upma!
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