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Jinu Turned Six

Jinu Turned Six The house was decorated with balloons and buntings Family cheered as Jinu turned six in the leap year gone by Multiply it by four, but my Jinu remained glued to six She lives away but her heart is here I baked two cotton cheese cakes atop with apricot icing For my friends at work and family at home Placed it before her photograph and all blew out the candles Little mementos for the children of friends For Jinu was once a sweet buttercup like them We remembered her growing up years and Nostalgically went through the leaves of the album Encrypted with her hairdo's and style trends There were her happy smiling faces since she was a babe Prancing around table tops and trees with Lucy her pet to Her unforgettable winter marriage celebrations On a thick foggy night where some got lost enroute Yet danced the night through to the rhythm of music Memories of children churn up on birthday celebrations By parents whose children remain in far away homes Touché! Her seventh birthday is around the corner Jinu turns seven and her baby will turn three! January 28, 2016 Contest: Birthday Party Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 2/11/2016 10:19:00 PM
Balveen, Congrats in Nayda's "Birthday Party win." Love LINDA
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 6:58:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 2/11/2016 4:34:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Balveen..
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 2/11/2016 3:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed this!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:00:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed Suan! Thanks!
Date: 2/10/2016 10:26:00 PM
Balveen, congratulations on your win! Leap year once every four years :( you really made me think ( feb. 29 or March 1st)
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Date: 2/14/2016 7:02:00 PM
Feb 29! A few days more and she turns 7( not 28)! Thanks Eve! I sure enjoyed writing it!
Date: 2/10/2016 8:28:00 PM
Lovely poem, Balveen. Congratulations on your prize winning write. In 5 years they can both celebrate their 8th birthday together.
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Date: 2/14/2016 7:04:00 PM
In 5 years celebrating their 8th birthday-I like that Daniel! Thanks!
Date: 2/10/2016 6:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem and win. She should have some special parties since they are so few. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/14/2016 7:05:00 PM
I know! I'm preparing for one as she will be with me soon! Thanks Joyce!
Date: 2/10/2016 6:36:00 PM
what a charming story Balveen must be strange to have a February 29th birthday. congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:07:00 PM
In fact, we all love it! It makes it so special!
Date: 2/10/2016 5:27:00 PM
Funny story, congrats on your win. BG
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:08:00 PM
Thanks Barbara!
Date: 2/10/2016 5:25:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Balveen
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/15/2016 4:37:00 AM
Thanks Nayda! It was so interesting!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:09:00 PM
Thanks Nayda! It was so interesting!
Date: 1/28/2016 10:56:00 PM
Very lovely.. Gl in contest Balveen..
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/29/2016 9:40:00 PM
Thanks for your good wishes, upma!

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