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Jimmy the Suit

He wore his big gaudy oversize rolex Chewing on some tex-mex with his ex Forever flipping through his rolodex On the phone with gents and rednecks He’d invite his clientele to a fashion vortex On the main floor of his triplex Where he sold suits in the annex And quality unisex turtlenecks In exchange for cash and cheques When he’d run out he’d offer rainchecks Or start showing off some fancy crewnecks Everything to get noticed at discotheques AP: 3rd place 2021 Posted on April 9, 2019

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John Watt

Date: 3/18/2020 7:42:00 PM

More 'ex' rhymes than I knew "ex"isted. Great theme, too and a lot of fun. No wasted lines to just add another rhymes, very cohesive. Enjoyed this a lot, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/18/2020 7:51:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2019 5:03:00 PM

whimsical and delightful monorhyming from you, Line. I enjoyed this a lot.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2019 10:29:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/10/2019 2:16:00 PM

This is so clever Line - I love this poem - had to fave - excellent! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2019 3:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jennifer. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 4/10/2019 12:43:00 AM

You have a great talent to write monorhymes

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2019 8:41:00 AM

They're so much much! Thanks, Timothy.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/9/2019 10:43:00 PM

Ha, ha. Can't wait to meet this Jimmy fellow. Ha, ha, ha. … You have certainly created a fitting to sequel to "The Ugly American" of the 1950's. Nicely done, Line. :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2019 8:42:00 AM

Thanks, Gershon, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 4/9/2019 10:05:00 PM

Wow, what a creative monorhyme, Line! Love it!! ;D ...And that closing line was perfectly fitting (and hilarious)!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2019 8:42:00 AM

Thanks, Rhona. Most appreciated.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/9/2019 8:18:00 PM

Really enjoyed this very unique poem, Line..Panagiota I could see Jimmy

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/9/2019 8:36:00 PM

Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.