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a shiver in the night beckons at the moon yet never an answer in the wind slowly most insipidly a silence takes over from within reaches deep leaving its touch of bitterness while drop by drop a poisoned dart tears scratching at the skin till there it is gone the smile the joy the warmth that's just a memory AP: Honorable Mention 2024 Posted on September 28, 2024

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Date: 9/28/2024 12:09:00 PM
It is hard to be vulnerable and then be ripped to shreds. Hugs
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Date: 9/29/2024 8:46:00 AM
Thankfully, I must admit that they are not my personal feelings although I suppose that, if I really tried, I could conjure up some distant buried unpleasant memories... but not today!

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