Jill the Dentist

Jill The Dentist


      There was once a dentist named Jill

      Who thought she was good with a drill

      And found doing a filling

      Really quite thrilling;

      If only her patients stayed still.


      06/04/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 6/30/2017 4:11:00 AM
Very funny should be on a dentists wall.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/30/2017 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Carole. // Barry
Date: 6/29/2017 9:17:00 AM
Love the humor Barry; so true about us patients squirming too!~Che :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/30/2017 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Cheryl. // Barry.
Date: 6/12/2017 11:08:00 AM
I found this one hilarious Barry congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/14/2017 1:33:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I wrote it a few days after going to my dentist (who is not called JIll )
Date: 6/11/2017 7:57:00 PM
Barry, this is sensational limerick!! Congrats, it is one that I liked a LOT.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/12/2017 10:50:00 AM
Tank you very much, Andrea. // Barry
Date: 6/5/2017 4:17:00 PM
I don't imagine that her patients shared the same love of the drilling..Humorous work..Good to laugh..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/5/2017 4:34:00 PM
You are probably right, Sara. Thank you for commenting.
Date: 6/5/2017 9:55:00 AM
Oh lol! I don't think I'd like to come near Jill, if you don't mind :D
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/5/2017 4:32:00 PM
Ha, ha, lol. Thanks for the comment.
Date: 6/5/2017 4:35:00 AM
This is a great Limerick! It made me burst into a giggle and smile Barry...exactly the affect it is meant to have. Thank you for the laughter my friend! : )
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/5/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie, I am pleased you enjoyed it. And thank you for the the Fav.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/5/2017 4:38:00 AM
P.S. I had to fave it. ; )
Date: 6/4/2017 9:03:00 PM
Good one, Barry! Janice
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/5/2017 8:07:00 AM
Thank you very much Janice.
Date: 6/4/2017 7:59:00 PM
There once was a patient named Bill Who went to a dentist for drill A hole's now in his mouth And the drill went south Why's he stuck with the bill? Enjoyed your thrilling limerick!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/5/2017 8:06:00 AM
Ha, ha, lol. Thank you very much Kim.
Date: 6/4/2017 7:21:00 PM
Haha..Nicely done Barry
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/5/2017 8:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph.
Date: 6/4/2017 2:57:00 PM
ha ha ha love it Barry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/4/2017 3:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jan.
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