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Jill the Dentist

Jill The Dentist There was once a dentist named Jill Who thought she was good with a drill And found doing a filling Really quite thrilling; If only her patients stayed still. 06/04/17

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Carole Gleed

Date: 6/30/2017 4:11:00 AM

Very funny should be on a dentists wall.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/30/2017 1:06:00 PM

Thank you Carole. // Barry

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 6/29/2017 9:17:00 AM

Love the humor Barry; so true about us patients squirming too!~Che :)

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/30/2017 1:06:00 PM

Thank you Cheryl. // Barry.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/12/2017 11:08:00 AM

I found this one hilarious Barry congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/14/2017 1:33:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. I wrote it a few days after going to my dentist (who is not called JIll )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2017 7:57:00 PM

Barry, this is sensational limerick!! Congrats, it is one that I liked a LOT.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/12/2017 10:50:00 AM

Tank you very much, Andrea. // Barry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2017 4:17:00 PM

I don't imagine that her patients shared the same love of the drilling..Humorous work..Good to laugh..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/5/2017 4:34:00 PM

You are probably right, Sara. Thank you for commenting.

Darren White

Date: 6/5/2017 9:55:00 AM

Oh lol! I don't think I'd like to come near Jill, if you don't mind :D

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/5/2017 4:32:00 PM

Ha, ha, lol. Thanks for the comment.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/5/2017 4:35:00 AM

This is a great Limerick! It made me burst into a giggle and smile Barry...exactly the affect it is meant to have. Thank you for the laughter my friend! : )

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/5/2017 8:11:00 AM

Thank you so much, Connie, I am pleased you enjoyed it. And thank you for the the Fav.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/5/2017 4:38:00 AM

P.S. I had to fave it. ; )

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/4/2017 9:03:00 PM

Good one, Barry! Janice

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/5/2017 8:07:00 AM

Thank you very much Janice.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/4/2017 7:59:00 PM

There once was a patient named Bill Who went to a dentist for drill A hole's now in his mouth And the drill went south Why's he stuck with the bill? Enjoyed your thrilling limerick!

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/5/2017 8:06:00 AM

Ha, ha, lol. Thank you very much Kim.

Joseph May

Date: 6/4/2017 7:21:00 PM

Haha..Nicely done Barry

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/5/2017 8:05:00 AM

Thank you very much Joseph.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/4/2017 2:57:00 PM

ha ha ha love it Barry:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/4/2017 3:11:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jan.