Barry Stebbings Poet Limerick

Jill the Dentist

Jill The Dentist


      There was once a dentist named Jill

      Who thought she was good with a drill

      And found doing a filling

      Really quite thrilling;

      If only her patients stayed still.


      06/04/17

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Carole Gleed June 30, 2017 at 4:11 AM Very funny should be on a dentists wall. Barry Stebbings June 30, 2017 at 1:06 PM Thank you Carole. // Barry

Cheryl Hoffman June 29, 2017 at 9:17 AM Love the humor Barry; so true about us patients squirming too!~Che :) Barry Stebbings June 30, 2017 at 1:06 PM Thank you Cheryl. // Barry.

Jan Allison June 12, 2017 at 11:08 AM I found this one hilarious Barry congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Barry Stebbings June 14, 2017 at 1:33 PM Thank you, Jan. I wrote it a few days after going to my dentist (who is not called JIll )

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2017 at 7:57 PM Barry, this is sensational limerick!! Congrats, it is one that I liked a LOT. Barry Stebbings June 12, 2017 at 10:50 AM Tank you very much, Andrea. // Barry

Sara Kendrick June 5, 2017 at 4:17 PM I don't imagine that her patients shared the same love of the drilling..Humorous work..Good to laugh..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Barry Stebbings June 5, 2017 at 4:34 PM You are probably right, Sara. Thank you for commenting.

Darren White June 5, 2017 at 9:55 AM Oh lol! I don't think I'd like to come near Jill, if you don't mind :D Barry Stebbings June 5, 2017 at 4:32 PM Ha, ha, lol. Thanks for the comment.

Connie Marcum Wong June 5, 2017 at 4:35 AM This is a great Limerick! It made me burst into a giggle and smile Barry...exactly the affect it is meant to have. Thank you for the laughter my friend! : ) Barry Stebbings June 5, 2017 at 8:11 AM Thank you so much, Connie, I am pleased you enjoyed it. And thank you for the the Fav. Connie Marcum Wong June 5, 2017 at 4:38 AM P.S. I had to fave it. ; )

Janice Canerdy June 4, 2017 at 9:03 PM Good one, Barry! Janice Barry Stebbings June 5, 2017 at 8:07 AM Thank you very much Janice.

Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2017 at 7:59 PM There once was a patient named Bill Who went to a dentist for drill A hole's now in his mouth And the drill went south Why's he stuck with the bill? Enjoyed your thrilling limerick! Barry Stebbings June 5, 2017 at 8:06 AM Ha, ha, lol. Thank you very much Kim.

Joseph May June 4, 2017 at 7:21 PM Haha..Nicely done Barry Barry Stebbings June 5, 2017 at 8:05 AM Thank you very much Joseph.

Jan Allison June 4, 2017 at 2:57 PM ha ha ha love it Barry:-) hugs Jan xx Barry Stebbings June 4, 2017 at 3:11 PM Thank you very much, Jan.