Jill M’dear

Jill m’dear, down the street, I
dilly dally sleep, and you
with your dog-fur-and-all
(what’s his name), and
the first time I see a hook
in place of a hand, your dad’s
(and I think, ‘perhaps a war’).

Down, my grandma,
from up North; and I
dilly dally sleep just down the road,
missing her, missing her, convinced
by mom and her to keep

company with friends - friends?
I miss her, miss her, my grandma
and not Jill m’dear, down the street -
not in the least. Still the memory,
does dilly dally and sends me
back in time to keep a candle burning.

We were never friends. She invited me
this one night - we didn’t mesh. I
left better friends back in the village.
I didn’t want to go and spend the night,
but I was convinced; and would I
remember this night so vividly, besides?

My grandma also convinced me
to wander out in curlers, ‘neath a scarf.
Self conscious was I, but if she was here,
back from the past, I’d wander out
once again, to a store, red in face.

Would I then go and spend time,
once more, with Jill m’dear, just 
to glimpse my gram’s convincing,
and hear her Buffalonian accent?
You betcha! …and see my mom, too.
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Crandall Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 7:27 PM
You can visit your grandma and mom in memories in poems, at least :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 7:33 PM
Yes! Hugs :)
Wolf Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 7:00 PM
Let's see: Not Jill Biden... Not Jill Stein... Perhaps the Jill of 'Jack & Jill?' -- Nah! I give up ~ Fool on the Hill, fooled by this Jill
Rodrigues Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 8:42 PM
LOL! Too funny!
Hind Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 11:41 AM
Interesting, if you can call it that, hmmm - it almost seems like something is giving you a real headache..."missing her, missing her, convinced by mom and her to keep company with friends - friends"....that stands out to me. <3
Hind Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 12:18 PM
Oh, alright. :) Thanks for explaining.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 11:51 AM
I love always spending time with family. We had recently moved to this street, back in the day, and I would have preferred to be with family instead of this girl. She just wasn’t someone that I had anything in common with…it happens. Just having fun with the memory. Hugs
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