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Jill M’dear

Jill m’dear, down the street, I dilly dally sleep, and you with your dog-fur-and-all (what’s his name), and the first time I see a hook in place of a hand, your dad’s (and I think, ‘perhaps a war’). Down, my grandma, from up North; and I dilly dally sleep just down the road, missing her, missing her, convinced by mom and her to keep company with friends - friends? I miss her, miss her, my grandma and not Jill m’dear, down the street - not in the least. Still the memory, does dilly dally and sends me back in time to keep a candle burning. We were never friends. She invited me this one night - we didn’t mesh. I left better friends back in the village. I didn’t want to go and spend the night, but I was convinced; and would I remember this night so vividly, besides? My grandma also convinced me to wander out in curlers, ‘neath a scarf. Self conscious was I, but if she was here, back from the past, I’d wander out once again, to a store, red in face. Would I then go and spend time, once more, with Jill m’dear, just to glimpse my gram’s convincing, and hear her Buffalonian accent? You betcha! …and see my mom, too.

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Date: 1/27/2025 7:27:00 PM
You can visit your grandma and mom in memories in poems, at least :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2025 7:33:00 PM
Yes! Hugs :)
Date: 1/26/2025 7:00:00 PM
Let's see: Not Jill Biden... Not Jill Stein... Perhaps the Jill of 'Jack & Jill?' -- Nah! I give up ~ Fool on the Hill, fooled by this Jill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2025 8:42:00 PM
LOL! Too funny!
Date: 1/26/2025 11:41:00 AM
Interesting, if you can call it that, hmmm - it almost seems like something is giving you a real headache..."missing her, missing her, convinced by mom and her to keep company with friends - friends"....that stands out to me. <3
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Paige Hind
Date: 1/26/2025 12:18:00 PM
Oh, alright. :) Thanks for explaining.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2025 11:51:00 AM
I love always spending time with family. We had recently moved to this street, back in the day, and I would have preferred to be with family instead of this girl. She just wasn’t someone that I had anything in common with…it happens. Just having fun with the memory. Hugs

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