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Jewels For the Earth: Split Haiku

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morning sun arise shine your warmth upon the Earth with DAZZLING TOPAZ LIGHT ~ soft glow in the night pale romantic lover's moon wears MOONBEAM PEARLS TONIGHT ~ twinkling stars on high draped on a black velvet sky like SPARKLING DIAMONDS ~ our sweet mother earth God gave you sun, moon and stars gifts OF JEWELS FOR YOU ~ ~ ~ March 26th, 2016 Split Haiku Contest for Mystic Rose

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Jill Spagnola
Date: 4/28/2016 12:06:00 AM
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Lin, this is a breathtaking piece, just beautiful!!!, jill
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/28/2016 7:19:00 AM
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Your words honor me greatly. Thank you, Jill.
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/6/2016 8:20:00 AM
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Your brush strokes gleamed in this beautiful string of haiku. Congratulations!
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:57:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Dineen.
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Joseph May
Date: 4/6/2016 6:14:00 AM
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I love all these gems..Congrats on your win
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:57:00 PM
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Thank you, Joseph.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/6/2016 5:38:00 AM
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Congrats on this beautiful haikus and placement Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:57:00 PM
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Thank you, Balveen.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/6/2016 2:04:00 AM
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Congrats on a worthy top place win with this superb string of haikus Lin..
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:55:00 PM
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Thanks, Upma.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2016 7:49:00 PM
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Congratulations Lin, well deserved...
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:55:00 PM
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Thanks, Charlie.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/5/2016 5:35:00 PM
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Ran out of time to see all the winners, but I have to at least come to YOURS at first place and say BIG congratulations to you.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:52:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Andrea. It's appreciated.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/5/2016 5:09:00 PM
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Beautifully written Lin many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:51:00 PM
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Thanks, Jan. Just returned from visiting my grandson in Florida and off again in the morning to Boston... where it's COLD!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/5/2016 5:03:00 PM
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Beautifully done, Lin. Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:50:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Sandra...hugs back.
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/5/2016 4:53:00 PM
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Lin, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:50:00 PM
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Thank you, Laura.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 4/2/2016 11:47:00 AM
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Nature portrayed so exclusively...gl
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:49:00 PM
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Thank you, Rizwana.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/27/2016 6:11:00 PM
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Kind of the way I did mine. Focusing on nature. Love the pattern it presented as well, Lin.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/28/2016 10:25:00 AM
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Thanks a lot, Andrea.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/26/2016 4:25:00 PM
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Enjoyed reading your work..Without the jewels earth would die..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/28/2016 10:25:00 AM
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Thank you, Sara.
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/26/2016 1:25:00 PM
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Wonderful way with words...
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/26/2016 2:00:00 PM
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Thanks so very much, Shaunda. I'm glad you visited.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/26/2016 9:20:00 AM
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Love #2. Well done Lin Lane. Good luck in the contest...
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/26/2016 9:32:00 AM
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Thank you, Charlie. The 2nd is my favorite as well.

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