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Jewels For the Earth: Split Haiku

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morning sun arise shine your warmth upon the Earth with DAZZLING TOPAZ LIGHT ~ soft glow in the night pale romantic lover's moon wears MOONBEAM PEARLS TONIGHT ~ twinkling stars on high draped on a black velvet sky like SPARKLING DIAMONDS ~ our sweet mother earth God gave you sun, moon and stars gifts OF JEWELS FOR YOU ~ ~ ~ March 26th, 2016 Split Haiku Contest for Mystic Rose

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Jill Spagnola

Date: 4/28/2016 12:06:00 AM

Lin, this is a breathtaking piece, just beautiful!!!, jill

Lin Lane
Date: 4/28/2016 7:19:00 AM

Your words honor me greatly. Thank you, Jill.

Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 4/6/2016 8:20:00 AM

Your brush strokes gleamed in this beautiful string of haiku. Congratulations!

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:57:00 PM

Thanks so much, Dineen.

Joseph May

Date: 4/6/2016 6:14:00 AM

I love all these gems..Congrats on your win

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:57:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 4/6/2016 5:38:00 AM

Congrats on this beautiful haikus and placement Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:57:00 PM

Thank you, Balveen.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/6/2016 2:04:00 AM

Congrats on a worthy top place win with this superb string of haikus Lin..

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:55:00 PM

Thanks, Upma.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/5/2016 7:49:00 PM

Congratulations Lin, well deserved...

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:55:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2016 5:35:00 PM

Ran out of time to see all the winners, but I have to at least come to YOURS at first place and say BIG congratulations to you.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:52:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea. It's appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2016 5:09:00 PM

Beautifully written Lin many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:51:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Just returned from visiting my grandson in Florida and off again in the morning to Boston... where it's COLD!

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/5/2016 5:03:00 PM

Beautifully done, Lin. Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:50:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sandra...hugs back.

Lu Loo

Date: 4/5/2016 4:53:00 PM

Lin, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:50:00 PM

Thank you, Laura.

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 4/2/2016 11:47:00 AM

Nature portrayed so exclusively...gl

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 2:49:00 PM

Thank you, Rizwana.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2016 6:11:00 PM

Kind of the way I did mine. Focusing on nature. Love the pattern it presented as well, Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/28/2016 10:25:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Andrea.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/26/2016 4:25:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Without the jewels earth would die..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 3/28/2016 10:25:00 AM

Thank you, Sara.

Shaunda Lindsay

Date: 3/26/2016 1:25:00 PM

Wonderful way with words...

Lin Lane
Date: 3/26/2016 2:00:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Shaunda. I'm glad you visited.

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/26/2016 9:20:00 AM

Love #2. Well done Lin Lane. Good luck in the contest...

Lin Lane
Date: 3/26/2016 9:32:00 AM

Thank you, Charlie. The 2nd is my favorite as well.