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 morning sun arise
shine your warmth upon the Earth
                   with
    DAZZLING TOPAZ LIGHT

                     ~
                     
       soft glow in the night
   pale romantic lover's moon
                  wears
 MOONBEAM PEARLS TONIGHT

                     ~

       twinkling stars on high
   draped on a black velvet sky
                    like
       SPARKLING DIAMONDS

                     ~

       our sweet mother earth
God gave you sun, moon and stars
                  gifts
      OF JEWELS FOR YOU

            ~       ~      ~


          March 26th, 2016
Split Haiku Contest for Mystic Rose

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:06:00 AM
Lin, this is a breathtaking piece, just beautiful!!!, jill
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Date: 4/28/2016 7:19:00 AM
Your words honor me greatly. Thank you, Jill.
Date: 4/6/2016 8:20:00 AM
Your brush strokes gleamed in this beautiful string of haiku. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, Dineen.
Date: 4/6/2016 6:14:00 AM
I love all these gems..Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:57:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 4/6/2016 5:38:00 AM
Congrats on this beautiful haikus and placement Lin!
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:57:00 PM
Thank you, Balveen.
Date: 4/6/2016 2:04:00 AM
Congrats on a worthy top place win with this superb string of haikus Lin..
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:55:00 PM
Thanks, Upma.
Date: 4/5/2016 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations Lin, well deserved...
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:55:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie.
Date: 4/5/2016 5:35:00 PM
Ran out of time to see all the winners, but I have to at least come to YOURS at first place and say BIG congratulations to you.
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. It's appreciated.
Date: 4/5/2016 5:09:00 PM
Beautifully written Lin many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:51:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Just returned from visiting my grandson in Florida and off again in the morning to Boston... where it's COLD!
Date: 4/5/2016 5:03:00 PM
Beautifully done, Lin. Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra...hugs back.
Date: 4/5/2016 4:53:00 PM
Lin, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:50:00 PM
Thank you, Laura.
Date: 4/2/2016 11:47:00 AM
Nature portrayed so exclusively...gl
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thank you, Rizwana.
Date: 3/27/2016 6:11:00 PM
Kind of the way I did mine. Focusing on nature. Love the pattern it presented as well, Lin.
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Date: 3/28/2016 10:25:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Andrea.
Date: 3/26/2016 4:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Without the jewels earth would die..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/28/2016 10:25:00 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 3/26/2016 1:25:00 PM
Wonderful way with words...
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Date: 3/26/2016 2:00:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Shaunda. I'm glad you visited.
Date: 3/26/2016 9:20:00 AM
Love #2. Well done Lin Lane. Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 3/26/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie. The 2nd is my favorite as well.

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