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Jewels For the Earth: Split Haiku

 morning sun arise
shine your warmth upon the Earth
                   with
    DAZZLING TOPAZ LIGHT

                     ~
                     
       soft glow in the night
   pale romantic lover's moon
                  wears
 MOONBEAM PEARLS TONIGHT

                     ~

       twinkling stars on high
   draped on a black velvet sky
                    like
       SPARKLING DIAMONDS

                     ~

       our sweet mother earth
God gave you sun, moon and stars
                  gifts
      OF JEWELS FOR YOU

            ~       ~      ~


          March 26th, 2016
Split Haiku Contest for Mystic Rose

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Jill Spagnola Date: 4/28/2016 12:06:00 AM Lin, this is a breathtaking piece, just beautiful!!!, jill Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 4/28/2016 7:19:00 AM Your words honor me greatly. Thank you, Jill.

Dineen Williams Gault Date: 4/6/2016 8:20:00 AM Your brush strokes gleamed in this beautiful string of haiku. Congratulations! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 4/6/2016 2:57:00 PM Thanks so much, Dineen.

Joseph May Date: 4/6/2016 6:14:00 AM I love all these gems..Congrats on your win Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 4/6/2016 2:57:00 PM Thank you, Joseph.

Balveen Cheema Date: 4/6/2016 5:38:00 AM Congrats on this beautiful haikus and placement Lin! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 4/6/2016 2:57:00 PM Thank you, Balveen.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/6/2016 2:04:00 AM Congrats on a worthy top place win with this superb string of haikus Lin.. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 4/6/2016 2:55:00 PM Thanks, Upma.

Charlie Smith Date: 4/5/2016 7:49:00 PM Congratulations Lin, well deserved... Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 4/6/2016 2:55:00 PM Thanks, Charlie.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2016 5:35:00 PM Ran out of time to see all the winners, but I have to at least come to YOURS at first place and say BIG congratulations to you. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 4/6/2016 2:52:00 PM Thanks so much, Andrea. It's appreciated.

Jan Allison Date: 4/5/2016 5:09:00 PM Beautifully written Lin many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 4/6/2016 2:51:00 PM Thanks, Jan. Just returned from visiting my grandson in Florida and off again in the morning to Boston... where it's COLD!

Sandra Haight Date: 4/5/2016 5:03:00 PM Beautifully done, Lin. Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 4/6/2016 2:50:00 PM Thank you very much, Sandra...hugs back.

Beautiful Scars Date: 4/5/2016 4:53:00 PM Lin, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 4/6/2016 2:50:00 PM Thank you, Laura.

Rizwana Bhurani Date: 4/2/2016 11:47:00 AM Nature portrayed so exclusively...gl Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 4/6/2016 2:49:00 PM Thank you, Rizwana.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/27/2016 6:11:00 PM Kind of the way I did mine. Focusing on nature. Love the pattern it presented as well, Lin. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/28/2016 10:25:00 AM Thanks a lot, Andrea.

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/26/2016 4:25:00 PM Enjoyed reading your work..Without the jewels earth would die..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/28/2016 10:25:00 AM Thank you, Sara.

Shaunda Lindsay Date: 3/26/2016 1:25:00 PM Wonderful way with words... Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/26/2016 2:00:00 PM Thanks so very much, Shaunda. I'm glad you visited.

Charlie Smith Date: 3/26/2016 9:20:00 AM Love #2. Well done Lin Lane. Good luck in the contest... Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/26/2016 9:32:00 AM Thank you, Charlie. The 2nd is my favorite as well.