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Do I hear footsteps on the corridors tonight Is there a gentle knock A firm, persistent knock Like night unclothing in a stars sweet light? Who is that lonesome shadow over the hill Heart so sweetly pounding Being so filled with longing I can hear her breathing, hear her so still Will you speak my name again, so low to me Like jasmines sweet arousing Bright sweat and light exposing I in joy, and sweet love's glowing intensity I have memories to keep, truth fadeless fair You may not come again And I must keep the stain Life is an iceberg, times are not what they appear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/12/2010 11:44:00 PM
I just love the imagery in this one, LIke the night unclothing in a star's sweet light . Awesome!
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Date: 9/6/2010 12:50:00 PM
another lovely write, seems wrong to separate them? perhaps an "s" on last word? Such a romantic man! Too bad you're not in your sixties ;) Light & Love
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Date: 9/6/2010 10:57:00 AM
Sweet sentiments, David Dear. I will go on also. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/3/2010 1:10:00 PM
Moving on excitedly to read the next....
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:44:00 AM
Im so loving this series. BG
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