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Jesus's Torment - The Villanelle Of The Will--

Jesus couldn't stop thinking about the will
It was just so Jesus and cross
But he could never forget the till

That morning, Jesus encountered a will so chill
He had to calm himself with a moss
Jesus couldn't stop thinking about the will

Later, Jesus was spooked by a drill
He tried to focus on a cos
But he could never forget the till

Mary said, the will wasn't that null
Said his mind had become too crisscross
Jesus couldn't stop thinking about the will

Jesus took action like a spill
The will was like a toxic os
But he could never forget the till

Jesus nosedived like a sweet lull
His mind turned into a voss
Jesus couldn't stop thinking about the will
But he could never forget the till

3/6/19

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