Jesus

Just a tiny baby
joyful about bringing
justice.  He and Father 
jointly prepared the plan.
Jailed and crucified,
justification paid,
Jesus bought man’s pardon.

By Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
12/24/2016
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 24, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Wow, I love this! :)
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December 24, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Thank you so much for leaving your comment. This is my first time writing or even knowing about the Pleiades form, which Andrea required for her last contest of the year. Having just recently returned to Poetry Soup, I wanted to give it a try. Your words are very encouraging.
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