Jerusalem, Jerusalem

ballad

I was a child creating kidstuff,
I lied and cheated just enough
to feel the guilt when all alone at home.
I copied homework from friend Sue
and passed it down the row to Lou.
We knew so little of Jerusalem. 

When in the end, I turned a teen
I tried the drug and boozing scene.
With just a few bad trips, it all hit home.
I spent a long weekend in jail
I thought I’d died and gone to hell.
No peace in that place,  no Jerusalem.

So glad was I when they said to me
let’s go to church as family.
It was belief that brought us to Shalom.
We’d fought like cats and dogs for aye
There had  to be a better way.
True contentment began at Jerusalem.

Of course, there is a God above!
I know Him as the God of love.
He  made the rules and guides us on to home.
He wrote the law, then paid the price
Son, Jesus  came as sacrifice
so we could tunnel through to Jerusalem.

'Twas there I learned to place me last
to put God first;  now when they ask,
“How come on Sundays you never stay at home?”
I am one who found that lost chord
no longer scared to serve my Lord -
I’ve found the peace that comes in Jerusalem.

I did not take Christ’s name in vain
I am a Christian with much to gain
and thus I greet you with a hearty Shalom.
I cannot keep Christ to myself
I cannot put Him on the shelf
for He is the Way to blest Jerusalem.

Jerusalem means  place of peace;
Jerusalem needs no police.
we’ll see that when God comes to take us home.
Salvation means that we have learned
forgiveness never will be earned.
It's the light we find in Jerusalem.


written January 17, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ligon Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 8:43 PM
Shalom, shalom. This is a very inspiring, well thought out, peaceful piece. Thank you, Jesus for bringing Jerusalem back to life and giving us peace!
Poteet Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Thank you, Juliet, your comment is encouragement to keep on writing. Yes, and I thank my Lord for the peace He brings in the midst of chaos.
Neumann Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 2:35 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. Jerusalem, so pertinent today and always. I am not a religious but a spiritual man, but/and this poem speaks deeply to me. Many kind wishes to you and Peace for all, Kai
Poteet Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 8:45 AM
I thank you, Kai, for the placement and more so for your comment. Shalom
Gentry Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations on your win with this tunnel vision poem.
Canerdy Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 1:13 PM
WONDERFUL, reverent, winning poem, Reason! Janice
Poteet Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Appreciate the comment, Janice, on my spiritual piece.
Gauthier Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Wow. Powerful and so well-crafted. Congrats on your most deserving win, Reason.
Poteet Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 7:51 PM
I am happy to read your reply; thanks for the kind remarks. Not the story of my own life; but of someone I knew well. Faith heals and makes of us what we can never be on our own.
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