Jerusalem

Jerusalem, in the white of night,  
  with all the ages steeped upon your shoulders, 
  and the tombs of fading kings; 
  history has been unkind to thee, 
  and the desert sea laden with endless enemies ----
  thou shooting star who shawn too bright! ----
  how wan the dying rose with Mecca roaring in the wind! 
  how it whispers a new witchcraft.... 

A new shackle the zealots bring, on hallowed ground.... 
  where angels fear to tread, lest they spill blood,
  like the lot of man, the rockets shall bring peace, they say!
  and from the east the Palestian, crushed like grapes in a winepress,
  betwixt Hebrew and madmen; 

'O Jerusalem, how the Lillie's lilt in thy wan shadow, 
  how the purge of men shudders to hear your final breath....
  no sun shines on thee like a risen Christ; 
  no banner he bears but love, 
  no weapon formed but wisdom to silence paranoia;
  lay down your swords, and he shall rebuild thee in three days

'O Jerusalem,
  you old arrid hero,
  who needs but the nectar of peace to heal thy ancient bones,
  an old name whispers on the wind.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Anish Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 2:18 PM
I don't know if you have ever been to Jerusalem but I have and believe me I won't soon forget it! I pray for peace in that area as well but the signs don't seem to be pointing that way. But then again this is only the present! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 7:01 PM
wow, you created such a thoughtful poem on this troubled land at a time of the year when our thoughts go to this sacred city. Very nicely done.
Michelle Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 5:55 PM
i agree, it does seem fit for song lyrics.. wonderfully written :) I love your imagery! Love, Juli-Michelle
O.J. Hunt Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Thanks Juli, I guess it does read somewhat like a song.All the best, Keith
Vaso Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 11:01 PM
Truly a classic poem, You have woven such beautiful prose with wisdom and beauty! :)
Devonshire Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 2:05 PM
Keith, you touched upon a troubling situation. The birthplace of Christianity has been a site of war for centuries. I wonder if there will ever be peace in Jerusalem. Your writing is outstanding, ALWAYS. As I leave to spend Thanksgiving with my sister, I want to thank you for your friendship. What a talent you have! Hugs, Carolyn
O.J. Hunt Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Thank you Carolyn I stand blushing like a king rose! Hope you enjoyed time with your sister; sorry for getting back late my WiFi is terrible with this site. Very many thanks for your kind friendship as well!
Lindley Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 5:01 PM
"Exceptional verses my friend. "
Lindley Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Exceptional verses my friend.
Chircop Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Oh that nectar of peace ..May it be heard...May all swords be laid down..in the name of love..Awesome.
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