David Crandall Poet Haiku

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6/16/2025 for Shaped Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by JCB Brul

jellyfish

                         
                     ppe
             h a             ars 
        fis                        unn          
    lly                                 oti     
jel                                       ced
     r    f   i   g      i     l    s    l
  d    i    t  n      a   m   e   s    y

 u         h          p         a          Z
 n         e          r          p          A
 t          e          e         p          P
 i          d          y         e           ! 
 l          l                      a      
            e                     r
            s                     s
            s



until heedless prey appears - zap!

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Vanya Evangeline July 3, 2025 at 12:32 AM oh, wow. This thing gotta be an irukandji, right? Congrats on the win. I love this

thriveni c mysore July 2, 2025 at 6:47 PM beautiful. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!! David Crandall July 2, 2025 at 9:12 PM Thanks Thriveni

Crystol Woods July 2, 2025 at 10:41 AM Fave! So creative! Xo David Crandall July 2, 2025 at 1:41 PM Thanks Crystol!

Linda Alice Fowler July 2, 2025 at 7:12 AM Zap is correct Dave my friend. Ouch! Congratulations! :) David Crandall July 2, 2025 at 1:41 PM Thanks! Luckily, I've never been stung - but my brother was! David Crandall July 2, 2025 at 1:41 PM Thanks! Luckily, I've never been stung - but my brother was!

Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2025 at 9:49 PM So cool how it resembles a jellyfish. Congrats David Crandall July 2, 2025 at 1:40 PM Thanks! There aren't too many animals that I can think of that have an easy shape to draw and identify.

Speaks Volumes July 1, 2025 at 7:17 PM Yup, it looks pretty scary. Well done ! David Crandall July 2, 2025 at 1:39 PM Thanks, haha, getting those spaces right, took a little doing - lol

Karen Jones July 1, 2025 at 6:56 PM Pretty! Congratulations on your win! David Crandall July 1, 2025 at 7:10 PM Thanks Karen!

Paula Goldsmith June 16, 2025 at 1:26 PM Your "jellyfish" is a creative write. Love This One... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away...............