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6/16/2025 for Shaped Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by JCB Brul

ppe h a ars fis unn lly oti jel ced r f i g i l s l d i t n a m e s y u h p a Z n e r p A t e e p P i d y e ! l l a e r s s s until heedless prey appears - zap!

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Date: 7/3/2025 12:32:00 AM
oh, wow. This thing gotta be an irukandji, right? Congrats on the win. I love this
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Date: 7/2/2025 6:47:00 PM
beautiful. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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David Crandall
Date: 7/2/2025 9:12:00 PM
Thanks Thriveni
Date: 7/2/2025 10:41:00 AM
Fave! So creative! Xo
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David Crandall
Date: 7/2/2025 1:41:00 PM
Thanks Crystol!
Date: 7/2/2025 7:12:00 AM
Zap is correct Dave my friend. Ouch! Congratulations! :)
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David Crandall
Date: 7/2/2025 1:41:00 PM
Thanks! Luckily, I've never been stung - but my brother was!
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David Crandall
Date: 7/2/2025 1:41:00 PM
Thanks! Luckily, I've never been stung - but my brother was!
Date: 7/1/2025 9:49:00 PM
So cool how it resembles a jellyfish. Congrats
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David Crandall
Date: 7/2/2025 1:40:00 PM
Thanks! There aren't too many animals that I can think of that have an easy shape to draw and identify.
Date: 7/1/2025 7:17:00 PM
Yup, it looks pretty scary. Well done !
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David Crandall
Date: 7/2/2025 1:39:00 PM
Thanks, haha, getting those spaces right, took a little doing - lol
Date: 7/1/2025 6:56:00 PM
Pretty! Congratulations on your win!
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David Crandall
Date: 7/1/2025 7:10:00 PM
Thanks Karen!
Date: 6/16/2025 1:26:00 PM
Your "jellyfish" is a creative write. Love This One... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away...............
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