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Jelly-Belly --- For Contest

She went to the beach on a whim 

She jumped in the water to swim

Her belly,... it wiggled !

Her bottom,... it jiggled !

The jellyfish thought she was kin !!



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Limerick Contest Sponsored by Jan Allison
4/25/15

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Carolyn Devonshire

May 3, 2015 at 3:03 PM

So funny, Carrie! Congrats on your win!

John Freeman

May 1, 2015 at 9:37 PM

Boy, Carrie this one is a gem, wittier than anything I've seen in a while. Smile, Agape, Moses

Casarah Nance

April 30, 2015 at 5:29 PM

Hahaha great!!!!

Mark Ackerson

April 30, 2015 at 12:32 PM

This is a hoot! This should be right where it is Carrie, at the top.

Teddy Kimathi

April 30, 2015 at 10:39 AM

Torrents of applause to you Carrie!!! ^_^

Judy Konos

April 30, 2015 at 9:08 AM

Congratulations!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

April 30, 2015 at 6:37 AM

Jelly Belly Gelly whack!!! Love Carrie.C'Grats.-R

Nandita Das

April 29, 2015 at 11:36 PM

Congratulations. As I said earlier this was the one that made me laugh the most.

Andrea Dietrich

April 29, 2015 at 10:58 PM

just knew she would adore this one. It's really the best!! congrats.

John Lawless

April 29, 2015 at 10:36 PM

Congrats on the top spot Carrie. A very sub-cutaneous take on the theme

Kp Nunez

April 29, 2015 at 7:21 PM

hahaha a cutie wiggly of a limy! Congrats Carrie! KIM :)

Eve Roper

April 29, 2015 at 6:55 PM

Hahaha.... Funny! Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7:~)

David Mohn

April 29, 2015 at 6:34 PM

This is great Carrie...big congrats

Tim Smith

April 29, 2015 at 5:32 PM

Stopping back to give congratulations

Skat A

April 29, 2015 at 5:26 PM

CARRIE, Congratulations...... SKAT LOVE

Poet Destroyer A

April 29, 2015 at 4:52 PM

Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick Win.... LINDA

Sandra Haight

April 29, 2015 at 3:59 PM

Ha Ha! Too funny, Carrie! Missed reading it before, but it's definitely First Place quality! Love it! Congrats! Sandra

Robert Stoner Jr

April 29, 2015 at 3:48 PM

lol very clever limerick Carrie, well done

Jan Allison

April 29, 2015 at 3:46 PM

Many congrats on your top spot Carrie - both my hubby and I loved this:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 29, 2015 at 10:46 AM

Ok, this made me wiggle, umm, jiggle--- oh I meant giggle with laughter, Carrie! I was expecting jelly beans when I read your title but found myself snickering with this one (jelly belly, snickers, my I am on sweets mode, it seems). Just dropping by a quick hi, Carrie! I hope to catch up with you soon! Very wiggly, oh I mean witty, limerick-- see, now I am getting all candy corny. I better stop. This is me, Nikko, in case you are wondering who this silly commenter is, haha.

Jack Ellison

April 28, 2015 at 2:45 PM

You've got a good shot at it dear Carrie... CUTE!!! Hugs, Jack xxx

Carolyn Devonshire

April 26, 2015 at 8:26 PM

Dear Carrie, a friend and I are now laughing hysterically. Thank you! Definitely a winner, probably a first place. It doesn't get any funnier than this. Love, carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

April 26, 2015 at 8:27 PM

Sorry the comment repeated. Soup is slow on my end today. Maybe it's the thunderstorms.

Carolyn Devonshire

April 26, 2015 at 8:25 PM

Dear Carrie, a friend and I are now laughing hysterically. Thank you! Definitely a winner, probably a first place. It doesn't get any funnier than this. Love, carolyn