Jello Love

White puffs of goodness.
Whip cream in love with jello.
Cold, jiggling flavor, 
Topped with foaming nothingness,
Yielding to gel's surrender.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
March 6, 2024 at 1:04 PM
Don't forget red sprinkles on top of the whip cream. We all need sprinkles in life don't we? Sprinkles of some kind. Your poem performs a wiggly dance. It was fun to read outloud
Greenhough Avatar
March 6, 2024 at 11:36 PM
I'm happy it made you smile. I like very much to see jello come out of fancy molds. The once fashionable ring mold was a knockout.
May Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 9:17 AM
An appetizing Tanka, Enjoyed
Greenhough Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 9:59 AM
Thank you.
Jones Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 1:52 AM
I like your poem. But I have this thing about jello. I don't like the texture or the way it jiggles and moves in my mouth. Lol I guess it is safe to say I am weird. Lol Great poem tho.
Greenhough Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 2:39 PM
A belated thank you. I don't always get the message.
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