Jealousy (Revised)

All bad characteristics draw eventually from,
Growing habits inside jealousy killing love.
Merely not one person’s quirks realizing sorrows,
Taking unbelievable viciousness,
We Xerox years zealously.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Muzzey Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 12:38 PM
A wonderful ABC poem, a win well deserved. You made it work even as difficult as this form is. Congratulations! Caryl
Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 5:18 PM
maybe jealously..is bit better? & xout ? Real style gal! Light & Love
Kopp Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 7:42 PM
A Beautiful Composition...Congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 12:32 PM
A late congratulations to you, Cecil! Must be hard to do this! LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Deborah's contest Cecil. Love,Carol
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 3:36 AM
Congratulations Cecil, on your 2nd place win in Deborah Guzzi’s, “Do You Know Your ABC’s?” contest with this a-z poem. (I'm Jealous...just kidding...It's my silliness playing again.) It's easy to see why you placed. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Fraser Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 12:25 PM
Many congratulations on your second place in Deborah's fine contest >> James
Johnson Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 7:49 AM
You are a master with this form. Congratulations. Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 6:39 PM
Congrats Cecil on your second place win in the ABC contest.. I knew when I read it the other night it was terrific ... well deserved win for a wonderful write.. luv.. Linda-Marie
Guzzi Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 3:04 PM
Both are excellent..please pick one for the contest. Two would not be fair to the others. Thank you so much for the effort! Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 2:47 PM
Wonderful and amazing ABC poetry Cecil.. your words are dynamic and special for those who concentrate on this read... perfect title to compliment the content... luv.. and thankxxx for your precious comments on my poetry today.. much appreciated by a gifted poet as yourself.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. don't know if u read the blogs but I just posted a new one for a new poem.. for Valentine's Day..
Hilliker Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 11:42 PM
Great job on this tough form. Good luck in the contest.
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