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She storms into the room
there is fire in her eyes
and thunder in her step
rage rumbling reckless
She's livid
a live wire of fire
charged
She's on the move
To punish
Is it a rumor or reality?
He has explaining to do...

She rushes at him
Pounding on his chest
words pent up all day
rush out in deluge
drenching him
he tries to pin her hands down
to make her understand
to undo this "misunderstand"
but she pushes him
her pride scorching him
her eyes sparking
passion raging

~~~R*A*G*I*N*G~~~

He pushes her against the wall
pins her hands above her head
"Listen to me!
You got it all wrong!!!"

she pushes against him
breasts heaving
legs kicking
and he's inflamed
her passion burns him
combusts in his mind
and he crushes her with his body
she bites his lips
as they close over hers
he loses his grip
her fingernails dig into his bare chest
trails of red
Growling in pain
He forces her....
kicking and screaming...
down to the floor
Pins her again
"Listen! WOMAN!"

She looks up into his face
breathless 
and he goes for her mouth again
Taking her lips into his mouth
sucking fiercely
his tongue tames
fierce...his need to possess
to claim

She fights to free her hands
and they are on his neck
Pulling him in...in
Her lips respond in like
his hand finds her hair
leverage...a grasp
he pulls to expose her neck
And he attacks
kisses...bites...His revenge
His innocence turned to intensity's indignation
she sighs...she moans...
the sounds goading him on
As he loses himself in her cleavage
licking up her perfume
His favorite scent...
sensuous sexy sweet

the storm is fever pitch
in a flash of lightning speed
He lies her bare
and thunders in the thighs
she opens for him...wide
eyes closed 
she bites her lower lip
to muffle her cries
as he rides....rides
His victory ride of righteous pride
and she's left
breathless...spent
in a storm of tears
released...repentant
of her insane jealousy

the storm passes over
and in the stillness
he speaks...
his voice shattered...weak
in her presence now calm
meek


"Your anger is beautiful
your rage my relish...
but now...come,"
His voice a whisper
as he pulls her in to him
"Come into my arms
and know the truth....
You're my one and only
My Passion STORM
Is YOU....YOU
Serenity...is overrated."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/5/2020 2:42:00 AM
A wild ride ride in the words. I liked the drive and the energy of the words. You brought the reader in and you held them. Nice ending to the outstanding poetry.
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Date: 7/7/2015 3:05:00 PM
Eileen, your work is outstanding, this brought back a memory that I relieved the same picture years go with a different twist I divorced him. 7++ my dear friend Eve
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Date: 7/6/2015 4:48:00 AM
raw and passionately daring, eileen... nice to see this back on the wall!.. huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:22:00 PM
Thanks, Nette. Yes, it is a little over the top, but...I had fun sharing it. Hugs
Date: 7/6/2015 3:25:00 AM
I just love this one... I can see everything so vividly! Your work is always worth reading more than once. This one is one of my favorites of yours. Keep up the excellent work! Always, Laura
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:43:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. Very sweet of you to share these words of commendation. Does my heart good. Hope all is well with you, Dear. hugs
Date: 7/5/2015 10:27:00 AM
Eileen, your write is very sensual and passionate and full of fierce love, 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13, who knew it would be selected as potd, wow
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:47:00 PM
Broken Wings, your work deserved to be showcased. It was very well written and deeply expressive. I'm happy for you, dear. Hugs
Date: 7/5/2015 9:46:00 AM
Re: your comment- please don't leave. We need fire. And passion. Viv x
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:46:00 PM
Thanks, Viv. I've had someone say that my work was too...explicit. It cut deep. Still, I am true to myself, for what I think of myself matters most. I'm grateful for your words of affirmation, dear. Hugs
Date: 7/5/2015 9:02:00 AM
So glad to see this one posted again. YRH has increased the soup temperature by at least 10 degrees. Now I can re-enter this one into my favorites.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:48:00 PM
HEE HEE...YRH...is up to her antics, again. I hope she her subjects enjoy her sultriness. Thanks, Richard, for lifting my spirits. Hugs
Date: 7/5/2015 1:26:00 AM
I knew we were in for a rollercoaster ride when I saw that you'd picked a picture with such feverish brushtrokes, Eileen. Anyway, now that I've read it I'm going to turn the fire extinguisher on myself. Phew. Viv x
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2015 8:14:00 AM
This is a poem I had posted some time ago and then deleted, Viv. I was planning on leaving this place. Now I'm slowly putting them back up. Glad you liked this one. There is something about unbridled passion that gets to me. Thanks for the visit. Hugs
Date: 7/4/2015 8:17:00 PM
This runs the whole gamut of emotions! You are amazing at these and as Charmaine said, a great movie theme! Love ya Miss Boop! xxx
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:41:00 PM
Went from pg 13 to R to xx.....wow Eileen, i want to give your pen a name but i dont know which....i loved it!!
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Date: 7/4/2015 3:17:00 PM
Eileen...Whilst I was readng these passionate lines filled with mistrust,love hate ,jealousy,I was imagining a movie gong in my mind..I always love those scenes in movies when from a fight without reason,lovers end up in eachothers arms.Your words are even more deep andcpleasurable to read.Those kind of situations gives an exciting fluttering feelinf inside when happeningvin real life and end up in happy endings.A favourite from me !
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