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Jill Nursery Rhymes contest Sponsored by Charles Messina

Jealous Jill



Jealous Jill has a very strong will She asked Jack to climb the hill To help her take the bucket to fill When coming back Jill tripped poor Jack Where at the bottom he lay so still Jealous Jill has a very strong will And so she too tumbled down the hill This way no one would ever suspect It was she who broke Jack's neck
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Goldsmith Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 12:25 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Jealous Jill" write again....  Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
Messina Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 1:44 AM
LOL- poor Jack. Very cute, Crystol. Congratulations on your win in my contest! Thanks so much for entering :) Charlie
Canerdy Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 7:07 AM
Baaaad Jill! LOL! Good one, Crystol. CONGRATS! Janice
Crandall Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 11:28 AM
Haha - one day, the truth finally comes out - good one!
Bell Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Poor Jack. In saying that, she did replace him with, Jack 2.
Woods Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 7:38 AM
Hummm... ok! Thanks for stopping by Paul! Xo
Jones Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 7:32 AM
Creative and clever! Good luck in the contest!
Woods Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 7:37 AM
Ty Karen! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 11:30 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun "Jealous Jill" write. Poor Jill... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away................
Woods Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 7:37 AM
Il check it out! Ty! Xo
Rodgers Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 10:18 AM
Dear Crystol, Well, that kept me captivated all the way till the end. Loved this nursery rhyme, and it was quite creative. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Woods Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 7:37 AM
Ty Daniel! Xo
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