Jealous Gratitude

I am jealous
of everything that has ever touched you,
the breaths of hot sunshine that have soothed your cheeks with hope,
the moonlight that has painted your lips with lilly silver,
the darkness that has calmed you into soft slumber,
the rain that has pelted your flesh with sky splash,
the breeze that has lifted your hair with seductive intent,

Jealous of every temptation that has made your soul sweat,
every secret that has sworn obedience to your obsessions,
every kiss that has taken a taste of your sweet heat
every man that has collapsed into your romance,
every mouth that has spoken your name with awe
every second that has circled your psyche,
every particle that has pranced through your bloodstream, 
every emotion that enlivens your ego,
every knot of knowledge that supports your smarts,
every star that has caught your girlish wishes,
every tear that slides faithfully from the pink rims of your eyelids,
every cut that has silenced your pride,

Jealous of every thing
that has left you, fed you, led you, entered you,
yet, I am grateful for all these odd and splendid things
that have known your beauty and pain,
for they have made my need for you real
and your love for me possible,
this jealousy is my love hypocrisy -

J.A.B.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/15/2015 2:27:00 AM
This.....is you....at your absolute best. Possessive mad love....jealous heat suits you.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 11/15/2015 6:38:00 PM
Jealous heat makes a beast of me...mad love owns my heart Eileen. I'm happy that you love this poem as much as I do...J.A.B.
Date: 4/8/2015 9:57:00 PM
I have read this several times already. Still can't get over the beauty...Sorry for not commenting before...sincere are my words when I say it has power and charm all its own...Kim :)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/10/2015 12:40:00 PM
I know you are sincere Kim, and that your a very passionate about love poetry...don't get over the beauty, get into it's red obsession Poetess...J.A.B.
Date: 3/30/2015 10:29:00 AM
Another awesome poem here!!:) wonderful write-Love Ettie
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Justin Bordner
Date: 3/31/2015 2:45:00 PM
Thanks for the love Ettie, it feels nice! Being honest about love is awesome, a wilderness of emotion and truth...J.A.B.
Date: 3/29/2015 9:10:00 PM
So so passionate these words.Yes when we love someone that much We just want everything that special person is -from his first thought to his last breath.What can I say,I can feel your heart pulse iin this ,and its bleeding deep and beating fast.A fav: )Charma
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Justin Bordner
Date: 3/31/2015 2:27:00 PM
Deep and fast passion always gets to the source of love Charma...you understand the pulse of my obsession, my need for her everything. Your view on this poem is so luscious with passion's intuition Charma...J.A.B.
Date: 3/28/2015 10:02:00 PM
Fascinating honesty uprooted from obsession and passion, and an instant favorite. The breeze with its 'seductive intent' The image of that tear sliding down.very treasurable lines of a fantastic love marvel. It is a conflicted emotion I think. It causes us to be so very saturated in want and need. Yet it demands our gratitude too. Your heart wants to imagine feel taste and breathe what you love the most. . I can definitely relate to this one and to the heart behind your work. Always, Laura
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Date: 3/29/2015 7:46:00 PM
The conflict between obsession and liberty, love and patience can become a balance of strength and desire or a torment of emotions. We gain what we deserve, this love is a marvel that I want to earn, cherish and preserve. I hope to mature through recognizing jealousy. We relate through talent and desire Laura...J.A.B.
Date: 3/28/2015 1:34:00 PM
Remarkable. Truly outstanding A masterpiece.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 3/28/2015 2:54:00 PM
Love is remarkable when expressed freely and completely Nandita. She and I are a masterpiece of passion. Your comment is beautiful, and means so much Nandita...J.A.B.
Date: 3/28/2015 8:43:00 AM
The words are inspiring and illuminating. A marvelous display of emotions. Very well done with wonderful feeling and depth. Emile.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 3/28/2015 2:49:00 PM
There really is a large spectrum of emotional , affectionate possessiveness coupled with admiration for the vast array of beautiful intricacy of her life that these metaphors express with a pure inspiration Emile, thank you. J.A.B.
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