Nette Onclaud Poet Tetractys

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Jays Welcome Autumn--Tet

Jays
wheel by
in tandem ,
a sky parade
roller coasting above verdant grassland. 

As harbingers of enchanted autumn
birdnotes usher
crisp morning--
red plumes
flung!



Tetractys This Poetry Contest
For charles messina   4/28/2019

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Eve Roper May 7, 2019 at 4:10 PM Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve

Andrea Dietrich May 4, 2019 at 2:39 PM Yours deserves to be in top placements, Nette. I loved it before and I love it now. Congrats.

Alexis Y. May 4, 2019 at 9:25 AM WoW! Nette, When I visit you I know I will read something amazing! I can just picture the birds flying in the majestic sky. Congratulations on a well deserved win. PS, I really appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2019 at 8:18 AM - Congratulations, Nette :)

Joseph May May 4, 2019 at 8:05 AM Lovely write Nette..Congrats on your win..

Charles Messina May 4, 2019 at 7:45 AM Beautiful autumn write, Nette. Congratulations on your win. Hugs // Charlie :)

Gershon Wolf May 1, 2019 at 10:08 PM The birds ARE the harbingers of the seasons...Precious penning, nette. G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon

Silent One April 29, 2019 at 2:01 PM As always, great imagery..

Janice Canerdy April 29, 2019 at 8:29 AM Great entry, Nette! Janice

Andrea Dietrich April 28, 2019 at 4:21 PM Gorgeous, Nette!!

John Castellenas April 28, 2019 at 4:05 PM I love how you use the language. Make the reader believe and see your words. A amazing poem.

Mystic Rose Rose April 28, 2019 at 5:32 AM Nothing but beauty lives here in the paradise of Nette and birds, I love it. Hope your day is as wonderful as you are. xo

Richard Lamoureux April 27, 2019 at 5:40 PM Great way to express The changing of seasons. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.

Kim Rodrigues April 27, 2019 at 3:58 PM Very pretty! Lovely imagery, Nette!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. April 27, 2019 at 2:32 PM Lovely. I can feel the early morning. 'a sky parade roller coasting ' Awesome lines

Tom Cunningham April 27, 2019 at 1:43 PM Love this one nette, a sky parade. Good luck. Tom. P.S. Soup mail.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2019 at 12:30 PM - A wonderful welcome to autumn, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter April 27, 2019 at 12:00 PM You made me hear the birds and their wings.