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Jasmine Candles Glow


Showered, pores open
Soft lighting awaits her lay
Jasmine candles glow
Tanned torso soon to glisten
Naked I, massage employed





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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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Dorian Petersen Potter

November 24, 2014 at 9:52 AM

Very pretty tanka James! Truly enjoyed it. :) have a great day! Love and hugs! xxx D.

November 24, 2014 at 10:20 AM

A few words that were a joy to write Dorian, hugs back xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

November 23, 2014 at 2:05 AM

:) sultry picture..

November 24, 2014 at 10:48 AM

Indeed ;-)

Brenda Meier-Hans

November 22, 2014 at 3:53 PM

Wow, James. Very creative dreams you have. Beautiful romantic.

November 24, 2014 at 10:50 AM

I'm always amazed when few words describe so much. Irrespective of the theme, but some themes are better than others. Thank kindly for the visit Brenda, James :)x

Charmaine Chircop

November 22, 2014 at 3:24 PM

Sensual..I really love jasmine scent -Beautiful!

November 22, 2014 at 3:40 PM

Thank you Charmaine. A few words, thrown to the air, what becomes, I'll de-lightly stare, thank you...x

November 22, 2014 at 2:42 PM

ooh how sensual James - great write:-) hugs jan x

November 22, 2014 at 3:07 PM

ooh thanks for letting me share them I am honoured:-) Hugs Jan xx

November 22, 2014 at 3:06 PM

Thank you Jan, welcome to my dreams > James :) xxx

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