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Jar Full of Pennies

Ban and J.R. sat in the kitchen restless in their chairs, rambling on with pleasure, they were such a pair. Outside a very pulling seductive summer day, but they were focused with what is in front of them. They have finished counting all the old copper wheat pennies in the canning jar, which was full to the brim. It was theirs. Their eyes wooed still, with anticipation; how many there are, as they shared. So many they thought, with open jaws. Once more their hand reached into the jar. With excitement, fingers curl around the copper coins, withdrew out a few stamped, with stars with hopes of spending the coins. 3/4/2023 Writing Challenge - ''J'' Words - Poetry Contest 2. Jar Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:08 PM
Eve, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Poet Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:45 PM
Congratulations on your contest win with this wonderful poem, Eve. Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 10:20 AM
- Back with a congratulations, dear Eve ... well deserved :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Lovely poem, Eve. Reminds me of my youth. Best for a win. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 3:38 AM
- We always had a jar of coins in my childhood home ... today we only use plastic cards ... a lovely poem for the contest, Eve - Best wishes :) - hugs
Turner Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 6:56 PM
Can't buy much with pennies anymore. A pleasure to read this evening, Eve. Good luck!
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