January

bright year of hope a perfect way to improve long and short days a little older a little wiser 365 days to come more fights but more maturity second chances more human creation a stronger America each day a new day dreams and choices better times to come another year

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Skat A

Date: 1/7/2014 12:59:00 PM

Heeun, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/7/2014 5:04:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Heeun ! - Lovely ode to January - well written - Pleased to read your first poem. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/7/2014 1:58:00 AM

Heeun, enjoyable. fits with great pleasure with great things to consider. ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@