Premiere Contest WinnerJaniform Juggler and Raccoon Rhythms CM

Written: November 02, 2025, for contest sponsored by: Charles Messina ********** The man in the elevator wore a nimbus atop his head, He claimed he was a janiform—half genius, half dead. A cheerful opsimath mastered the art of juggling spoons, While humming mellifluous tunes to passing raccoons. His nickname was “Treacle Tom,” but no one knew why, He adorned his socks with jelly beans and icy pumpkin pie. With rhythmic bursts, he danced as a lively sprite. And gave a lecture on narcolepsy at every traffic light. Once sipping lifeless tea, he felt a sudden revelation, That the spirit resembled a rodent caught in vibration. Though noisome in aroma, his charm was at its zenith— Could the man in the elevator be a legend or merely a myth?
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Griffin Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 6:54 AM
Bravo!
La France Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 1:10 PM
Sotto, big congratulations on your First Place win in the contest with this amazing poem, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 11:31 AM
Back with Congratulations on your first place win. I enjoyed reading your fun/creative "Janiform Juggler and Raccoon Rhythms" write again. Love This... Have a fun day with your win..............
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Lasaad. this was absolutely hilarious and brilliant...Congratulations on your top win in my contest!
Miller Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 8:19 AM
Hillarious, congratulations
Canerdy Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 6:27 AM
Say, I think I had Algebra II with this guy my senior year in high school! Seriously, Sotto, this is hilarious. CONGRATS on your top win! Janice
Jones Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 6:16 AM
Congratulations on your top win for your funny poem Sotto!
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 11:09 AM
wonderful creative write!! All the best in the contest!
Beaufort Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 10:59 AM
SP, this is an amusing and fun read. Makes me wonder about behavior and how we can interpret what people are about. Much to think about in terms of how we react to things that we might not like in all forms. This makes me appreciate my ability for patience. Smiles!!
Hind Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 5:41 PM
This is so smart and cool, Sotto!! I was completely captivated!! :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 5:00 PM
an engaging poem! I appreciate the humor entwined...'gave a lecture on narcolepsy at every traffic light' How unique. best wishes with this contest entry, Texas hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 10:45 AM
Maybe a part 2 telling if is he a legend or merely a myth???  "Good Luck" We both did this one. Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
Jones Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 8:33 AM
"He claimed he was a janiform—half genius, half dead" Lol at this line! Good writing! Good luck in the contest. I tried my hand at it too!
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