Jane

I once knew a girl who liked to fish named Jane, Oft she'd go to the lake with her seine. "What an idiot", I thought ... until a fortune she wrought She sold them at the store and they all were bought!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2010 10:11:00 PM

I see congratulations are in order. Good job, Daniel. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/18/2010 11:43:00 AM

good one, congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/18/2010 4:51:00 AM

Congratulations Daniel on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/17/2010 8:56:00 PM

DC, congratulation on your win in John's contest ¤ Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/17/2010 5:49:00 PM

Congrats Dan on your winning poem in the Giggles Poetry contest with this awesome write..enjoy another sweet victory tonight.. with luv..caio..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/17/2010 5:40:00 PM

And I say good for Jane. And good for you for being a winner. Love,Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2010 5:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, dear friend! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/17/2010 5:01:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Daniel

John Freeman

Date: 8/17/2010 5:00:00 PM

Congratulations Daniel on your third place victory. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2010 1:26:00 PM

Cute one, Daniel! Wish I could make a living fishing. Best wishes in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/17/2010 3:03:00 AM

A nice clerihew, Daniel

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/17/2010 1:54:00 AM

interesting Clerihew Daniel, enjoyed the read. Harry