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Jamesy

Jamesy thinks he's complex
  Always rescuing his thoughts
    Mending his broken words
      Even believes his reality
        Shaping outcomes that never will
          Yellow shades paint his truth

Copyright © James Marshall Goff | Year Posted 2009

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Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/20/2009 5:21:00 AM Ok I don't agree with the last two lines....you can..do..and continue to..........manifest! And why yellow? Love Ya as always Login to Reply

Charlene Bird Date: 7/15/2009 9:57:00 AM Well, Jamsey you keep the dream alive and set one foot infront of the other, who knows what can happen? A good read! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/15/2009 3:31:00 AM James great form for you. Excellent writing. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 7/14/2009 11:57:00 PM Love that last line Jim.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

C. E. Mcmullin Date: 7/14/2009 6:58:00 PM Bless you, Poet James Marshall Goff, for allowing us the privilege of welcome in this, house of your heart, may we always enter with shoes removed! poet butterfly Login to Reply

C. E. Mcmullin Date: 7/14/2009 6:57:00 PM Bless you, Poet James Marshall Goff, for allowing us the privilege of welcome in this, house of your heart, may we always enter with shoes removed! poet butterfly Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 7/14/2009 6:23:00 PM Wonderful piece...love mending his broken words..shaping outcomes that never will...I say let Jamesy keep on dreaming the impossible...someday he may just will them into existence....awesome piece. Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/14/2009 6:00:00 PM Jamesy have many many thoughts--too many--may the colour of the rainbows and the yellow shades of sun paint his everyday reality--great write Jamesy-charma Login to Reply