Jake Stanson Murray (Last Part)

Shock waved over from a puddle to form an ocean as Jake stood taking splash after splash
of emotions that rolled him not to understand on how he should react to this rude from her
remark yet pleasant from the feel of her hands on his shoulders position.

What? 

He finally said without movement, still in a slouch to keep her hands where they were for
she was small in comparison to him and wanted the warmth to linger.

Ya man!
I never seen a stuttering stanley before!
Like I mean I  saw it in the six sense, but that's a movie
I never seen someone actually have that speech impediment before!
Every once and while you hear people with lisps, but who cares about that!

She's crazy...
She has to be, it's like going up a to burned victim and saying O MAN COOL SCARS!
...wait now I'm comparing myself to a burn victim that's horrible...
gosh I'm full of self pity!

Jake still stood slouched still listening to this rambling, odd, no care in the world hair
covering one eye girl. This converse wearing, RIOT displaying, purple eyeshadow blaring, 
rare type of girl. And he felt her fingers shift yet stay on his shoulders as she kept on
going with her interest of stutters, at least he thinks she kept going in the same
subject, cause he was
too surrounded by the feel of her hands, engulfed by the movement of her glossed lips,
hypnotized by the shifting of her small hips, and enthralled by the slight bouncing of her
soft perky-

Hey!
So what do you say?

(SNAP welcome back to the real world Jake)

What?

I said my friend bailed on me and we where supposed to watch a movie together
but I still want to see the movie and my ride doesn't pass for three hours either way
want to kill time with me?

..heart failing
skin sweating
must...find..reality check

A finger poked a side of his rib which gave him recognition that this was the earth and he
did not just fly to space.

SO are you in or out stuttering stan- I mean...what's your name again? My name is Genesis

Jake smiled and stood straight.

Hi
My name is Jake
and sure I would love to hang.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/5/2010 3:03:00 AM
Interesting story. Sara
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