Jailed

A zoo ---visited....
the keepers locked me away
for scaring the apes

© Harry J Horsman  2010

senryu

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Wilma Neels

September 25, 2010 at 10:32 PM

Harry congrats on your win with this hilarious write. ;) enjoy whats left of your weekend

Francine Roberts

September 25, 2010 at 11:40 AM

too funny Harry, congrats on your win

James Fraser

September 24, 2010 at 10:07 AM

haha, nice one Harry. Blimey, you can't be that bad. Many congrats >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 24, 2010 at 9:20 AM

Congrats harry on your win in the Zoo contest... a superb Senryu.. enjoy your win this happy weekend with luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 24, 2010 at 7:12 AM

Congratulations on your win Harry in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Tales From the Zoo". It is an honor to be on the winners list with you. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

September 24, 2010 at 4:55 AM

Congratulations on your win, Harry! Love this one! Best wishes, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

September 23, 2010 at 11:32 PM

The apes probably do think we are the locked away ones. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Nate D.

September 23, 2010 at 10:47 PM

A poem well done keep your fascinating poetry coming" Nathan

Barbara Gorelick

September 23, 2010 at 10:44 PM

So funny..congrats on placing #7 in my contest..Tales From the Zoo..BG

Gert W. Knop

September 23, 2010 at 5:05 AM

Hahaha, Harry! Great Senryu! Hope it did not happen to you so!..Best of luck for the contest! Enjoyed the read...Gert

Doris Culverhouse

September 22, 2010 at 5:12 PM

Harry...why would you do that?? Did you hear the one about the ape and the peach seed? enjoyed eading your work.

Carolyn Devonshire

September 22, 2010 at 6:06 AM

NICE twist, Harry!! We probably do scare animals more than they frighten us. Cool entry for Barbara's contest! Best wishes for success with your great senryu. Love, Carolyn