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Constance La France's J With Four Options Contest...5 Aug 25...' The heart of a poet always feels the bliss and terror of a pen grinding...'   ~ by poet

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The skyline cuts through faded tones, With moonglow blazing gilded bronze And fluid my ink is interlaid As nightfall drifts like a peace shroud The glass pane teeters in the breeze With my pen zigzagging on damp papyrus I hear an old couple laugh on the alley Their banter rolling , perhaps, of younger times-- Across them, a lone man trots, forlorn His bent spine enduring road's travail, Leading his wobbly feet to tangles of blooms While egrets scuffle homeward bound. My mixed thoughts wander at this picture show ...Receding off so gradually From the tip- tap screech of cobblestones To my pane's sill, fingers reach for verses Where each day is a page to write new stories About jagged yet sleek edges of time's folly My hands sinking into tattered phrases, kneading Recitals of life with unknown episodes.

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Date: 8/5/2025 4:25:00 PM
Upon completion of this write, I looked up to see a passerby, then I glance down again upon the work.. almost surprised to only see words, where moments before it was a scene with interesting things to see, unique sounds to decipher, and aromatic fragrances to breathe in. Nette, your pen should be a travel agent for those who long to wonder to wonderful places!
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Date: 8/5/2025 4:15:00 PM
powerful and soulful words...left me a bit awed. I especially liked: About jagged yet sleek edges of time's folly My hands sinking into tattered phrases, kneading Best wishes with the contest!
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