Jan Allison Poet Jueju

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Jaded Poetry Writer

Tormented by writers block
I stare for hours at the clock
Leaching tears, I feel so blue
My missing muse - where are you?

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Lynn Marie April 15, 2017 at 6:59 PM A lovely jueje Jan:) Touching sentiments, exquisitely penned. A beauty:) lynnxxx

Paul Callus April 3, 2017 at 4:13 PM Back with congratulations, Jan...indeed a worthy top winner!! Hugs // paul

Kim Merryman April 3, 2017 at 12:14 PM I really like this, Jan! Great jueju! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 7:43 PM Yours was so cute. Congrats on the great win, Jan.

James Inman April 2, 2017 at 6:01 PM How cute Jan. Doesn't seem to be missing to me.

Constance La France April 2, 2017 at 4:18 PM Jan congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju and your image is amazing too ~

Carolyn Devonshire April 1, 2017 at 4:06 PM Congratulatons on your win, Jan! Your muse did not let you down after all. Hugs, Carolyn

Joseph May March 31, 2017 at 9:48 PM Dropping back with my congrats Jan Allison April 1, 2017 at 3:25 AM Many thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie March 30, 2017 at 12:35 AM This is amazing Jan :-) Great skill to pen the feel of writer's block in so few words. Excellent writing:-) lynnxx Jan Allison March 30, 2017 at 2:37 AM Thanks Lynn I keep a few poems in stock for when words fail me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett March 24, 2017 at 5:10 PM Brilliant Jan, writers block such a curse, though we know it's only temporary, good luck in the contest, Roy. :)) Jan Allison March 24, 2017 at 5:16 PM I have a little stock of poems just in case it hits:-) hugs Jan xx

Sushma A. Singh March 22, 2017 at 8:50 PM The fact that you converted an imaginary 'writers block' to a poem speaks volumes about your skills in overcoming it should you ever really have to face it :) Good Luck for the contest! Jan Allison March 23, 2017 at 4:03 AM I am rarely lost for words when it comes to writing Sushma:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus March 22, 2017 at 6:46 PM You are certainly no jaded writer, Jan:) I like your take on the 'jaded' theme, and most visitors to this page will be agreeing/relating to what you wrote. Hugs // paul Jan Allison March 23, 2017 at 4:04 AM Thanks Paul if my muse has a little holiday then so do I lol:-) hugs jan xx

Just James March 22, 2017 at 12:28 PM Loved it...I can relate!! Jan Allison March 22, 2017 at 1:01 PM I hope it doesn't happen to us too often James:-) hugs Jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven March 22, 2017 at 8:28 AM Aaaargh I hate this too. Nicely captured frustration. Best of luck in the contest. Jan Allison March 22, 2017 at 9:20 AM Hopefully it doesn't happen to us too often Scott:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis March 22, 2017 at 6:35 AM She is just beside you, helping you write this beautiful piece of poetry dear, Jan! hugsxx Jan Allison March 22, 2017 at 7:12 AM Thanks Demetrios and I truly LOVED your poem today:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 22, 2017 at 3:37 AM - I love the color blue ... but not on you ... - I'll send you the rainbow ... choose a different color :) - Lovely written, Jan - Good luck in the conest - Happy day - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison March 22, 2017 at 5:13 AM Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Supraja Kannan March 21, 2017 at 10:24 PM This is lovely Jan... Beautifully expressed the writers block... Unique form ...Good luck with the contest... Jan Allison March 22, 2017 at 5:14 AM Thanks Supraja:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May March 21, 2017 at 9:46 PM I hate it when my muse is a no show..Nicely penned Jan Jan Allison March 22, 2017 at 5:15 AM Hopefully it doesn't happen too often:-) hugs jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman March 21, 2017 at 9:14 PM Can definitely relate to your clever write about writers block Jan! Enjoyed~Che :) Jan Allison March 22, 2017 at 5:16 AM I hope it doesn't happen too often:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian March 21, 2017 at 8:26 PM Awwwww.....a sweet little write, dear. :) I found the expression "leaching tears" to be fascinating. Good luck in the contest, Jan. Jan Allison March 22, 2017 at 5:19 AM Thanks Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith March 21, 2017 at 6:45 PM Check in Teds pants they might still be in the bathroom...lol Tim Smith March 21, 2017 at 7:13 PM Lol Jan Allison March 21, 2017 at 7:00 PM ha ha ha of course to me pants are not trousers but they are underpants and I'm not looking in those!!!!:-)hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 21, 2017 at 6:42 PM wonderfully done, Jan. I am doing jaded too!!! Jan Allison March 21, 2017 at 6:59 PM Thanks Andrea I've not seen many choose this option:-) hugs Jan xx