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Jaded Jaundiced Views

Jaded by the put me downs Justly feel my facial frowns Jaundiced views debilitate Jeopardise my feeble state Penned 20 March 2017 Used qijue format

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/7/2017 7:49:00 PM

This is good, Seren! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

James Inman

Date: 4/3/2017 8:46:00 AM

I think most of us can relate to your poem Seren. Love the way you wrote it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2017 7:54:00 PM

I really like how you did yours. It's very metrical too!

Constance La France

Date: 4/2/2017 4:54:00 PM

Seren congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju, it is very emotional

Tim Smith

Date: 3/20/2017 4:18:00 AM

Just going through the motions hoping tomorrow will be a brighter day...Lovely poetry Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2017 3:09:00 PM

hope this day is a good one....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2017 2:17:00 AM

I can relate to this one at the moment Seren:-( hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2017 3:10:00 PM

Have the trolls been trouncing you again.......Seren