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Jaded Jaundiced Views

Jaded by the put me downs
Justly feel my facial frowns
Jaundiced views debilitate
Jeopardise my feeble state


Penned 20 March 2017

Used qijue format

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2017

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April 7, 2017 at 7:49 PM

This is good, Seren! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

April 3, 2017 at 8:46 AM

I think most of us can relate to your poem Seren. Love the way you wrote it.

Andrea Dietrich

April 2, 2017 at 7:54 PM

I really like how you did yours. It's very metrical too!

Constance La France

April 2, 2017 at 4:54 PM

Seren congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju, it is very emotional

March 20, 2017 at 4:18 AM

Just going through the motions hoping tomorrow will be a brighter day...Lovely poetry Seren

March 22, 2017 at 3:09 PM

hope this day is a good one....Seren

March 20, 2017 at 2:17 AM

I can relate to this one at the moment Seren:-( hugs Jan xx

March 22, 2017 at 3:10 PM

Have the trolls been trouncing you again.......Seren

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