Jack's Harem

Day one without our lim'rick dad
It's cloudy and I feel quite sad
I sneak in his room
Try on his perfume
and call his harem to come to his pad
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Meade Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 5:35 PM
I wonder . . . was it Chanel N°5 -- Jack is such a Brut kind of guy!! a Harem indeed!
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 3:57 PM
I posted a limerick today Tim - keep the limerick fun going for dear Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx
Nunez Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 1:57 PM
lol! a limerick worthy of the young gun...7 for you! :)
Relish Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:47 AM
LOL I was smiling when I saw the title... I have'nt been around lately, so have missed his writings... I can understand how you must be feeling:)... wishing you a nice weekend.. Nadiya.
Das Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:26 AM
Hahaha...nice one.
Smith Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 10:21 AM
thanks Nan....I have to get the dictionary out for the next one...in Jacko's honour
Andresen Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 9:02 AM
- A cool one, Tim - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 10:20 AM
Thanks A-L...have a beautiful weekend
Chircop Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 8:53 AM
I miss our Santa too Tim...Sweet limerick : )
Smith Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 8:56 AM
Thanks sweet Charmaine as Jack would say : )
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