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Jacks Brown Bunny

Betty had a good buddy whose name was Jack His brown bunny she took for a verbal attack This retort she had Made her feel too bad So Betty brought her buddies brown bunny back!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/27/2018 6:28:00 PM
That last line is quite a tongue-twister!
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Pat Adams
Date: 9/28/2018 1:26:00 PM
Yeah, you could get your tang tongulled up!...80)
Date: 9/26/2018 8:25:00 PM
G'day PAT … as Betty should. The brown bunny wasn't meant for Jack's dinner was it? I didn't think so - thanks Pat - Lindsay
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Date: 9/27/2018 4:08:00 PM
Well, I'm assuming he wanted it back for petting rather than dining but I'm not sure. (I hope not) 80)

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