Jacks Brown Bunny

Betty had a good buddy whose name was Jack
His brown bunny she took for a verbal attack
This retort she had
Made her feel too bad
So Betty brought her buddies brown bunny back!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 6:28 PM
That last line is quite a tongue-twister!
Adams Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Yeah, you could get your tang tongulled up!...80)
Laurie Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 8:25 PM
G'day PAT … as Betty should. The brown bunny wasn't meant for Jack's dinner was it? I didn't think so - thanks Pat - Lindsay
Adams Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Well, I'm assuming he wanted it back for petting rather than dining but I'm not sure. (I hope not) 80)
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