Jacketed - dodo

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Written, February 27, 2024
For The Contest, “Vo Dee Oh Doe”
Sponsor, Kim Rodrigues
Rules: Nonsensical words used back in the day- with a little humor

Words used from “1950’s Slang Dictionary”
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Meaning Of Words Used
Going Steady
Necking in the car– great time!
Drive-in movie- success sealed.
Awesome place- wound up and crazed!
With cute girl- heaven!

Backseat bingo- such a blast! Passion pit- made in the shade. Fat City- cranked and crazy! With dolly- cloud nine!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/31/2024 11:02:00 AM

Nice to see the winners' list with your name on it and also, see what everyone else wrote for the contest. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K

Terry Miller

Date: 5/29/2024 8:40:00 AM

I love this take on the contest, well written and congratulations

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/28/2024 9:11:00 PM

Loved this, Sandra! Made me think of “Happy Days.” Congrats!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/27/2024 5:54:00 PM

Dear Sandra, This is bursting with playful energy! Each line evokes a specific, nostalgic image - bingo nights, cozy moments, wild concerts, and carefree joy. It's a fantastic encapsulation of youth and its vibrant experiences. The cryptic "Dodo" adds an intriguing twist, making me wonder if it's a symbol or a hidden meaning. I love your unique style and playful spirit! - Bkessings, Daniel

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/27/2024 6:13:00 PM

Hi Daniel! Thanks for the visit and your uplifting comments on my poem! The "dodo" is an addition to the title requested by the contest sponsor so she would not read the poem before judging it. The contest rules are to use nonsensical words from a different era, so I chose some slang words used in the 1950s. The poem is about a dude going to a drive-in movie with his gal. I've explained it all in the "poet's note" area above the poem. Anyway, I appreciate your nice feedback! Thanks again!