Jack Uzzi

There was a ladies man named Jack Uzzi He fell hard for a bikinied floozy She said, "I feel wet." They started to pet In Jack's whirlpool of love she felt woozy

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/3/2020 5:30:00 PM

Well crafted, Jack ! LOL

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/3/2020 5:37:00 PM

Just call me 'Crafty.' lol. Thanks, Line! ~cy/gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2020 2:40:00 PM

haha, the wet line!!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/3/2020 4:13:00 PM

Ha, ha!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/3/2020 2:09:00 PM

I bet she did, all those bubbles lol

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/3/2020 4:12:00 PM

Champagne whirlpool, eh? Pretty tricky, that Jack Uzzi!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/3/2020 1:49:00 PM

very funny, gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/3/2020 4:10:00 PM

Thanks for the feedback, Ilene. Smiles, gw

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2020 12:57:00 PM

ha ha ha GW would be even more saucy if you swapped lines 3 and 4 lol:-) hugs Jan xx thanks for the giggle:-)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/3/2020 4:09:00 PM

Ah, I was all wet, I guess. Thanks, Jan. :) gw

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/3/2020 12:06:00 PM

Giggles. Why was I sure that big guns were about to be pulled? ;), xomo