Constance La France Poet Pantoum

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Jack the Cat

I am Jack and I live on a farm,
was born in the barn one of many;
oh, I am the only cat with charm,
but my best friend is the horse- Penny.

Was born in the barn . . .  one of many,
oh, I like all of the farm creatures;
but my best friend is-  the horse Penny,
like all here no matter their features.

Oh, I like all of the farm . . . creatures,
there is a bully of a rooster;
like all here  . . . no matter their features,
even like big bird we call Brewster.

There is a BULLY of a rooster,
oh, I am the only cat-   with charm;
even like . . . big bird we call Brewster,
I am Jack and I live-   on a farm.

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April 10, 2020


Poetry/Pantoum/Personification/ Jack the Cat
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1242-876-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France

Written for the contest, Pantoum Personification
sponsor, Eve Roper, Inspiration is Image #2

Third Place

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Darlene De Beaulieu May 13, 2020 at 1:30 PM Hello Dear heart, the picture is so cute. it made me smile. The poem is cute to. I am making this my fav. enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu May 14, 2020 at 8:29 AM Hello Daer herat, This poem made me smile. That cat really shoes llove for the horse. So cute. Enjoy your day my friend. Constance La France May 13, 2020 at 6:20 PM Darlene, thanks for the FAV and the comment, appreciate _Constance

Eve Roper May 9, 2020 at 10:43 PM Congratulations on your win, Dear Heart , in the pantoum rhyme and personification contest. Great job with the theme you decided to choose. Thank you for your participating in the contest. Hugs Eve Constance La France May 10, 2020 at 9:18 AM Thanks for my placement, appreciate _Constance

John Watt May 9, 2020 at 6:09 PM I can totally see why you would fall in love with the kitty gif... enjoyed your farm -centric rendition of this unusual pairing; the cat going down the list of the other animals, very cute and clever. Congrats and hugs ~ John Constance La France May 10, 2020 at 9:19 AM John, thanks for the visit, the congrats and the great comment, appreciate _Constance

Quoth Theraven April 12, 2020 at 5:29 PM Must agree with the comments, lyrical with a certain magical quality. 'I am Jack and I live on a farm, was born in the barn one of many; oh, I am the only cat with charm,'. And that video is the cat's pajamas. Wonderful Pantoum _Constance. -Richard Constance La France April 12, 2020 at 6:50 PM Richard, thanks for the great comment and compliment on my poem, appreciate -Constance

Jan Allison April 11, 2020 at 10:34 AM absolutely charming Constance!:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France April 11, 2020 at 2:54 PM Jan, thanks for visiting, I absolutely loved that image and thanks for the hugs _Constance

Lindsay Laurie April 10, 2020 at 6:46 PM Hello Dear Heart … very lyrical indeed. I could see your verse sung to children who I believe would love to listen to - thanks Dear Heart - Lindsay Constance La France April 11, 2020 at 2:56 PM Lindsay, thanks for visiting, yes, I think it would make a nice story for a child, Jack the cat on the farm, oh he could have all kinds of adventures _Constance