Jack and Tom

Jack and Tom share the same foe
They run from Carver's deathblow
	Carver delivers
	giblets and slivers
eaten with a fine Bordeaux!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 4:49 PM
what a fun read...brought a smile to my face :-)
Fowler Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 6:45 PM
Thanks for showing your smiling face Sara! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 10:48 AM
What a creative/fun write. Love It... Have a fun day writing away...............
Fowler Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 6:44 PM
Thanks dear Paula. hugs! :)
Hind Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 4:34 PM
Cute! Makes sense to me now after reading your explanation for the other Jack poem- :)
Fowler Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 7:17 PM
LOL. True poetry shouldn't confuse the reader Paige. Fun to write!
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