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Jack and Jill Went Over the Hill

Jack and Jill went over the hill 'cause the top was very small They bounced and rolled right down the hill like a great big rubber ball They bounced with the pail of water that they gathered at the top Bruised and wet they kept on falling while praying that they would stop They finally stopped and came to rest at the bottom of the hill Then ran for home to change their clothes before they caught a chill There's a moral to this story getting water is no fun when you take another to the top That was made to fit just one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/28/2014 4:07:00 PM
Hehe Roger, where for out thou Roger. Get your paper out and write me some more! :) Chuckle yours are fun
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Date: 4/28/2014 4:22:00 PM
I thank you Casarah, I have been busy and I have not been able to write. I will try soon. It is hard because I am the only one that has to do everything.......Hugs......Roger
Date: 3/31/2014 3:50:00 PM
Made me giggle - well written rhyme Roger. Jan xxx
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Date: 3/31/2014 4:14:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I was giggling when I wrote it.......Roger
Date: 3/31/2014 8:13:00 AM
Nice one friend roger. it makes me smile. Have a nice day ;) cheers!
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Date: 3/31/2014 8:15:00 AM
Thanks Maria, It makes me smile too. You also have a nice day......Your friend........Roger
Date: 3/27/2014 10:25:00 PM
I'm guilty, Jack better make room for two. Ha-ha. Enjoyed. Hugs ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:30:00 PM
Thanks again Skat, I'm glad you enjoyed my goofy poem......Hugs......Roger
Date: 3/27/2014 8:23:00 PM
Cute one, and Richard is right. It's very entertaining!!
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:19:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm in one of those moods. Can you tell?
Date: 3/27/2014 7:13:00 PM
Thoroughly entertaining Roger!
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:18:00 PM
It still entertains me when I read it. Can you tell I was bored this morning. Thanks for stopping by Richard
Date: 3/27/2014 1:59:00 PM
Reading this gave me a good idea of what you are looking for in the entries of your contest. This is a decently descriptive write with good rhyming.
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Date: 3/27/2014 2:28:00 PM
Robert, You are one of the few that get my style of rhyme. It must have good flow. Thanks for your nice words........Roger
Date: 3/27/2014 11:04:00 AM
Superb sense of humour! and it rhymes so fluently too. // paul
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Date: 3/27/2014 11:08:00 AM
Thanks Paul, I was just having some fun. Nothing like taking a nursery rhyme and making it funny........Roger
Date: 3/27/2014 10:23:00 AM
Hello Roger, lol..I have to admit, watching them roll down the hill like a great big rubber ball, was awesome.. OUCH! No, more water for the two, on the next trip... A great moral. A fun read... Well, I'm off to see the wizard!... :) xox~ Linda
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:47:00 AM
So you say
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:31:00 AM
Why would he come and see me instead, I'm no better than he?
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Linda, I am glad that you liked the poem. Maybe the wizard is off to see you instead.......Hugs......Roger

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