Jack and Jill

An old gal known to us all as Jill
Who lived in an old house on a hill
Going out for a stroll
Ended up in a roll
With jack at the bottom of the still



Written:  June 2nd, 2014

For Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/23/2014 2:52:00 PM
Clever!
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Date: 6/21/2014 11:14:00 AM
Had me smiling with this cute one. love phyl
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Date: 6/17/2014 9:26:00 AM
This is hilarious my dear Elaine. Congrats on your fine win.
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Date: 6/14/2014 12:03:00 AM
Hi, Elaine, , :)Congratulations on your win. "Linda"
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Date: 6/10/2014 1:04:00 PM
Hilarious! I bet old Jack got her drunk and took advantage huh? I may have to have a word with him...Congrats my friend - Tim
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Date: 6/17/2014 9:22:00 AM
:)
Date: 6/9/2014 6:04:00 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara
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Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 6:46:00 PM
Thank you Sara, for your kind comments. Elaine
Date: 6/9/2014 5:15:00 PM
Dear Lainie, This is very funny! Love the way you put the "still" in there. Very clever. Congratulations, dear! Love, carolyn
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:28:00 AM
ha ha like this funny limerick Elaine congrats on win hugs
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Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:57:00 AM
Thank you Shadow, It was a fun contest. bfn Elaine
Date: 6/8/2014 8:27:00 AM
Clever one, congrats.
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Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:57:00 AM
thank you Richard, Yes! I am not very good at writing Limericks, but this one was fun. Elaine
Date: 6/8/2014 7:31:00 AM
Elaine, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~
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Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:55:00 AM
Thank you, Skat. It was a fun contest. bfn Elaine
Date: 6/7/2014 9:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, Elaine
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Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:55:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram. It was fun contest. bfn Elaine
Date: 6/7/2014 9:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Elaine. AWesome to see you on the list.
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Date: 6/7/2014 8:02:00 PM
hmmmm naughty JACK! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:54:00 AM
Hi Deb, Thanks. bfn Lainie
Date: 6/7/2014 7:36:00 PM
Clever Elaine, a fun limerick, grats on the win :)
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Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:53:00 AM
Thank you Casarah. bfn Elaine
Date: 6/7/2014 6:11:00 PM
HeHeHeHe:-) very witty write - Bravo on your great win!
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Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Pandiata. Yes! Being an old gal myself, I thought it was funny too. lol! bfn Elaine
Date: 6/5/2014 4:29:00 AM
Love the humour! gl in contest! // paul
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Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:51:00 AM
Thank you Paul, I just couldn't resist this one. Elaine
Date: 6/4/2014 3:38:00 PM
haha, I love how you ended them up at a still!!!
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Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:50:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. I am not very good at writing Limerick's, but I had fun with this one. bfn Lainie
Date: 6/2/2014 8:01:00 PM
Exactly how it happened :-) nice
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Elaine George
Date: 6/4/2014 6:33:00 AM
Thank you for reading and your comments, Kira. bfn Lainie
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