Elaine George Poet Limerick

Jack and Jill

An old gal known to us all as Jill
Who lived in an old house on a hill
Going out for a stroll
Ended up in a roll
With jack at the bottom of the still



Written:  June 2nd, 2014

For Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy Contest

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Vassilis Comporozos August 23, 2014 at 2:52 PM Clever!

Phyllis Babcock June 21, 2014 at 11:14 AM Had me smiling with this cute one. love phyl

Abdulhafeez Oyewole June 17, 2014 at 9:26 AM This is hilarious my dear Elaine. Congrats on your fine win.

Poet Destroyer A June 14, 2014 at 12:03 AM Hi, Elaine, , :)Congratulations on your win. "Linda"

Tim Ryerson June 10, 2014 at 1:04 PM Hilarious! I bet old Jack got her drunk and took advantage huh? I may have to have a word with him...Congrats my friend - Tim Abdulhafeez Oyewole June 17, 2014 at 9:22 AM :)

Sara Kendrick June 9, 2014 at 6:04 PM I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 6:46 PM Thank you Sara, for your kind comments. Elaine

Carolyn Devonshire June 9, 2014 at 5:15 PM Dear Lainie, This is very funny! Love the way you put the "still" in there. Very clever. Congratulations, dear! Love, carolyn

Shadow Hamilton June 9, 2014 at 7:28 AM ha ha like this funny limerick Elaine congrats on win hugs Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 10:57 AM Thank you Shadow, It was a fun contest. bfn Elaine

Richard Lamoureux June 8, 2014 at 8:27 AM Clever one, congrats. Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 10:57 AM thank you Richard, Yes! I am not very good at writing Limericks, but this one was fun. Elaine

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 7:31 AM Elaine, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~ Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 10:55 AM Thank you, Skat. It was a fun contest. bfn Elaine

Dr.Ram Mehta June 7, 2014 at 9:48 PM Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, Elaine Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 10:55 AM Thank you Dr. Ram. It was fun contest. bfn Elaine

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2014 at 9:44 PM Congrats on your win, Elaine. AWesome to see you on the list.

Debbie Guzzi June 7, 2014 at 8:02 PM hmmmm naughty JACK! Congrad's on your win Light & Love Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 10:54 AM Hi Deb, Thanks. bfn Lainie

Casarah Nance June 7, 2014 at 7:36 PM Clever Elaine, a fun limerick, grats on the win :) Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 10:53 AM Thank you Casarah. bfn Elaine

Pandita Sietesantos June 7, 2014 at 6:11 PM HeHeHeHe:-) very witty write - Bravo on your great win! Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 10:52 AM Thank you Pandiata. Yes! Being an old gal myself, I thought it was funny too. lol! bfn Elaine

Paul Callus June 5, 2014 at 4:29 AM Love the humour! gl in contest! // paul Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 10:51 AM Thank you Paul, I just couldn't resist this one. Elaine

Andrea Dietrich June 4, 2014 at 3:38 PM haha, I love how you ended them up at a still!!! Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 10:50 AM Thank you Andrea. I am not very good at writing Limerick's, but I had fun with this one. bfn Lainie

Kira Price June 2, 2014 at 8:01 PM Exactly how it happened :-) nice Elaine George June 4, 2014 at 6:33 AM Thank you for reading and your comments, Kira. bfn Lainie