Jack Ace, Jackass

He’s 
cool,
jack of all trades
master of none,
as he manipulates 
women for fun.

He’s
cold, 
ice in his veins
and slick lil' snake,
he'll kill ta' steal the deal
real as he's fake

He’s 
cruel,
crowned heart breaker 
full trophy case,
but most ladies know him as
"Lowly Jack-Ace"


This is RHYME METER~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pritts Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 2:34 PM
Much, much better. It flows a lot more smoothly. Good job. Rockman :-)
Pritts Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 8:27 AM
That was amusing. The meter leaves a little to be desired but still a good write.
Mister Roboto Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 12:52 PM
what can I say///I'm no Rock Man.
Greenlee Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 7:12 AM
I really like your stuff too.I try to write different types of poetry that challenge me,I feel as though I will grow as a writer if I do.Thanks for your comment for sure,and I'll be back to read more of yours.HAVE A GREAT DAY!
Rutherford Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 5:02 AM
Captivating poetic jewel Joseph, a winner for sure. Anne
Johnson Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 7:50 PM
The last line is the pay off, Joseph. I would have you know that Joseph is my favorite masculine name. My dad was Joseph. My youngest brother is a Joseph; and my great-grandson bears that name. Great writing, Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
Green Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 9:18 PM
i can learn from you,, thanks for sharing...
Castro Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 5:19 PM
7UP
Butterfly Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 4:09 PM
ADORABLE!!! Joeseph...RELATIVE!!!?!!! LOL...thanks for your comment....Randa
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 12:06 PM
Thank you for you kind comment Joseph. I wish you the best in the contest if you wrote it for Paula's contest. Your Jack Ace is a real stinker isn't he? Do have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 9:51 AM
How clever, Joey! And I love the new word you came up with "Jack-Ace." If this is an entry for Paula's contest, I'm wishing you success. We ladies have met quite a few Jack-Aces along the search for a perfect mate. Ahoy, my friend, leaving for my fishing trip tomorrow night. Will be gone for a week, so have a great holiday weekend! Love, Carolyn
Zzzzz Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 4:47 AM
Inventive write...you made me smile.
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