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Jack Ace, Jackass

He’s cool, jack of all trades master of none, as he manipulates women for fun. He’s cold, ice in his veins and slick lil' snake, he'll kill ta' steal the deal real as he's fake He’s cruel, crowned heart breaker full trophy case, but most ladies know him as "Lowly Jack-Ace" This is RHYME METER~

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Rockman Pritts

Date: 5/28/2011 2:34:00 PM

Much, much better. It flows a lot more smoothly. Good job. Rockman :-)

Rockman Pritts

Date: 5/28/2011 8:27:00 AM

That was amusing. The meter leaves a little to be desired but still a good write.

Jslambert Mister Roboto
Date: 5/28/2011 12:52:00 PM

what can I say///I'm no Rock Man.

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 5/28/2011 7:12:00 AM

I really like your stuff too.I try to write different types of poetry that challenge me,I feel as though I will grow as a writer if I do.Thanks for your comment for sure,and I'll be back to read more of yours.HAVE A GREAT DAY!

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/28/2011 5:02:00 AM

Captivating poetic jewel Joseph, a winner for sure. Anne

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/27/2011 7:50:00 PM

The last line is the pay off, Joseph. I would have you know that Joseph is my favorite masculine name. My dad was Joseph. My youngest brother is a Joseph; and my great-grandson bears that name. Great writing, Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

John Aaron Green

Date: 5/26/2011 9:18:00 PM

i can learn from you,, thanks for sharing...

John Castro

Date: 5/26/2011 5:19:00 PM

7UP

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 5/26/2011 4:09:00 PM

ADORABLE!!! Joeseph...RELATIVE!!!?!!! LOL...thanks for your comment....Randa

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/26/2011 12:06:00 PM

Thank you for you kind comment Joseph. I wish you the best in the contest if you wrote it for Paula's contest. Your Jack Ace is a real stinker isn't he? Do have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2011 9:51:00 AM

How clever, Joey! And I love the new word you came up with "Jack-Ace." If this is an entry for Paula's contest, I'm wishing you success. We ladies have met quite a few Jack-Aces along the search for a perfect mate. Ahoy, my friend, leaving for my fishing trip tomorrow night. Will be gone for a week, so have a great holiday weekend! Love, Carolyn

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/26/2011 4:47:00 AM

Inventive write...you made me smile.