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Jack Ace, Jackass

He’s 
cool,
jack of all trades
master of none,
as he manipulates 
women for fun.

He’s
cold, 
ice in his veins
and slick lil' snake,
he'll kill ta' steal the deal
real as he's fake

He’s 
cruel,
crowned heart breaker 
full trophy case,
but most ladies know him as
"Lowly Jack-Ace"


This is RHYME METER~

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Rockman Pritts Date: 5/28/2011 2:34:00 PM Much, much better. It flows a lot more smoothly. Good job. Rockman :-) Login to Reply

Rockman Pritts Date: 5/28/2011 8:27:00 AM That was amusing. The meter leaves a little to be desired but still a good write. Login to Reply Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 5/28/2011 12:52:00 PM what can I say///I'm no Rock Man.

Kacey Greenlee Date: 5/28/2011 7:12:00 AM I really like your stuff too.I try to write different types of poetry that challenge me,I feel as though I will grow as a writer if I do.Thanks for your comment for sure,and I'll be back to read more of yours.HAVE A GREAT DAY! Login to Reply

Anne Rutherford Date: 5/28/2011 5:02:00 AM Captivating poetic jewel Joseph, a winner for sure. Anne Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 5/27/2011 7:50:00 PM The last line is the pay off, Joseph. I would have you know that Joseph is my favorite masculine name. My dad was Joseph. My youngest brother is a Joseph; and my great-grandson bears that name. Great writing, Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

John Aaron Green Date: 5/26/2011 9:18:00 PM i can learn from you,, thanks for sharing... Login to Reply

John Castro Date: 5/26/2011 5:19:00 PM 7UP Login to Reply

Wandering Butterfly Date: 5/26/2011 4:09:00 PM ADORABLE!!! Joeseph...RELATIVE!!!?!!! LOL...thanks for your comment....Randa Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/26/2011 12:06:00 PM Thank you for you kind comment Joseph. I wish you the best in the contest if you wrote it for Paula's contest. Your Jack Ace is a real stinker isn't he? Do have a wonderful day. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/26/2011 9:51:00 AM How clever, Joey! And I love the new word you came up with "Jack-Ace." If this is an entry for Paula's contest, I'm wishing you success. We ladies have met quite a few Jack-Aces along the search for a perfect mate. Ahoy, my friend, leaving for my fishing trip tomorrow night. Will be gone for a week, so have a great holiday weekend! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 5/26/2011 4:47:00 AM Inventive write...you made me smile. Login to Reply