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Ivory Tower

Existing, so removed, in your ivory tower From high in your loft you wield your power You weave your emotions like Rupunzel’s hair dangling enticingly waiting to snare Keeping your feelings locked behind bars elusive and untouchable distant as the stars Seemingly honest and raw and true easy to trust what you say and do Woven with steel emotions impenetrable your victim will feel completely irreparable You are always right, you never bleed everything you do plants a calculated seed Little by little the insecurities grow eating away at what we think we know Dare we not question our reality thinking we know what’s apparent to see You know what to say how to speak to a heart your ego unchecked you execute your part Perfectly played you’ve planted the guilt how dare we believe what we think we have felt Go away and come back do not let go paralyzed with doubt insecurity will grow Finally the escape before our soul is gone entombed as it becomes in a deadly catacomb The climb from this well is steep and so hard but we leave this hell with emotions chard The light will be warm and stinging at times bright days grow longer we know we’ll be fine Escaping the world of a narcissist Is full of traps and emotional twists Be strong and true to yourself and your goal never again allowing that emotional control.

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Date: 12/16/2017 7:47:00 PM
I came down here and saw that indeed, I had seen your first post here. Do you know what I realized? you posted this on 9/11 and it's got Tower in the title!!
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Judith S
Date: 12/16/2017 10:29:00 PM
Wow Andrea !!! I did NOT realize that !!! Crazy!!
Date: 11/17/2017 6:11:00 PM
Yes its hard to break free from a control like this. I especially love your last two lines Judy, if only some can heed that advice. Great first poem. I hope you are enjoying being here on PS?.....Maria
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Judith S
Date: 11/17/2017 9:49:00 PM
Thank you for reading Maria. I appreciate your kind words. This was based on experience and a hard lesson learned. ~ Judy
Date: 11/14/2017 6:15:00 PM
Excellent work that is very inspirational to never give in to the emotional instant that reacts possibly in the wrong direction. Which is why this is an amazing poem that encourages strength when feeling emotionally drained. Loved it!
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Judith S
Date: 11/16/2017 12:53:00 PM
Kristina ... thanks for visiting me!! Amazing comment and understanding of my meaning :) Best, Judy
Date: 10/29/2017 8:28:00 PM
wow! Yes it's crazy how much a narcissist can have on someone, until they finally break free! Nice job!
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Judith S
Date: 10/30/2017 5:57:00 AM
Thanks for taking the time to read Becca!! Your blog was such a great idea!!! ~ Judy
Date: 10/28/2017 7:15:00 PM
I have know enough narcissists to recognize them immediately and steer clear. Experience helps so much. I can relate acutely to your intelligent poem that is excellently written. : )
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Judith S
Date: 10/29/2017 10:41:00 AM
Connie ... I envy you then. Not always so clear in the beginning for sure! Thanks for taking the time to read. I will be catching up with everyone's blog suggestions over the next few days. Looking forward to reading some of your work as well.
Date: 10/28/2017 6:23:00 PM
A beautiful, deep and emotional write Judith escaping the smothering blanket of someone's control... both are scary, the controller and the escape.. thought-provoking content and imagery, well done!
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Judith S
Date: 10/29/2017 10:36:00 AM
Susan ... thank you so much for reading! I appreciate your recognition of the emotion that went into the write. Looking forward to catching up on your work as well. Best .... Judy
Date: 10/28/2017 11:43:00 AM
Wonderful flow amidst a delightful story, and a joy to read this Saturday. I haven't been around much on here, but a warm welcome from me to you, James :)
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Judith S
Date: 10/29/2017 10:25:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and warm welcome James!!! ~Judy
Date: 10/28/2017 9:48:00 AM
Powerful debut poem, Judith. Absolutely stunning in it's laser perception. A lot of truthful introspection woven in the words. A soul-stirring poem. Aurora bright write. Pure poetry. Read Becca's blog. Welcome to PSoup, sis. May love light your path always.
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Judith S
Date: 10/29/2017 9:53:00 AM
Freddie ... Thank you so much for your amazing, inspirational words on my poem!! Thank you for the welcome and the wishes ... and for reading me. ~ Judy
Date: 10/28/2017 8:23:00 AM
You could be describing my dad. I left home when I was 17 and thankfully survived my childhood. Welcome to the soup. I read your comment on Becca's blog.
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Judith S
Date: 10/29/2017 9:51:00 AM
Richard ... That's very sad that you should have that experience as a child. I'm sure this shaped the person you are today. Thanks for reading ;-)
Date: 10/20/2017 2:47:00 PM
Never let anyone control you... Especially a narcissist... this is a deep emotive write
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Judith S
Date: 10/20/2017 3:33:00 PM
Dear Silent One. Thank you for your comments. I am becoming a huge fan or YOUR writings! Looking forward to reading more. Best, Judy
Date: 9/20/2017 10:26:00 AM
Beautiful poem. I only saw 2 you wrote. I want more
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Date: 9/17/2017 11:39:00 PM
Great poem. I enjoyed reading it. It was vivid and intense. Would you mind critiquing mine?
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Judith S
Date: 9/18/2017 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Maurice. I will definitely take a look at your work.
Date: 9/17/2017 3:53:00 PM
Lovely penned piece Judith, this shows fine penmanship indeed, look forward to reading more from you, welcome to PS and hope you enjoy it.
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Judith S
Date: 10/20/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Gordon for this long ago comment. I'm afraid I'm still getting used to this site and didn't see it.
Date: 9/11/2017 6:29:00 PM
Great first post I see here, Judith. WElcome to Soup. I really like when people write with metaphors.
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Judith S
Date: 9/18/2017 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!!

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