Ivory Tower

Existing, so removed, in your ivory tower
From high in your loft you wield your power

You weave your emotions like Rupunzel’s hair
dangling enticingly waiting to snare

Keeping your feelings locked behind bars
elusive and untouchable distant as the stars

Seemingly honest and raw and true
easy to trust what you say and do

Woven with steel emotions impenetrable
your victim will feel completely irreparable 

You are always right, you never bleed
everything you do plants a calculated seed

Little by little the insecurities grow
eating away at what we think we know

Dare we not question our reality
thinking we know what’s apparent to see	

You know what to say how to speak to a heart
your ego unchecked you execute your part

Perfectly played you’ve planted the guilt
how dare we believe what we think we have felt

Go away and come back do not let go
paralyzed with doubt insecurity will grow

Finally the escape before our soul is gone
entombed as it becomes in a deadly catacomb

The climb from this well is steep and so hard
but we leave this hell with emotions chard

The light will be warm and stinging at times
bright days grow longer we know we’ll be fine

Escaping the world of a narcissist
Is full of traps and emotional twists

Be strong and true to yourself and your goal
never again allowing that emotional control.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 7:47 PM
I came down here and saw that indeed, I had seen your first post here. Do you know what I realized? you posted this on 9/11 and it's got Tower in the title!!
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December 16, 2017 at 10:29 PM
Wow Andrea !!! I did NOT realize that !!! Crazy!!
Williams Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 6:11 PM
Yes its hard to break free from a control like this. I especially love your last two lines Judy, if only some can heed that advice. Great first poem. I hope you are enjoying being here on PS?.....Maria
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November 17, 2017 at 9:49 PM
Thank you for reading Maria. I appreciate your kind words. This was based on experience and a hard lesson learned. ~ Judy
Whitmore Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Excellent work that is very inspirational to never give in to the emotional instant that reacts possibly in the wrong direction. Which is why this is an amazing poem that encourages strength when feeling emotionally drained. Loved it!
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November 16, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Kristina ... thanks for visiting me!! Amazing comment and understanding of my meaning :) Best, Judy
Teagan Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 8:28 PM
wow! Yes it's crazy how much a narcissist can have on someone, until they finally break free! Nice job!
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October 30, 2017 at 5:57 AM
Thanks for taking the time to read Becca!! Your blog was such a great idea!!! ~ Judy
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 7:15 PM
I have know enough narcissists to recognize them immediately and steer clear. Experience helps so much. I can relate acutely to your intelligent poem that is excellently written. : )
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October 29, 2017 at 10:41 AM
Connie ... I envy you then. Not always so clear in the beginning for sure! Thanks for taking the time to read. I will be catching up with everyone's blog suggestions over the next few days. Looking forward to reading some of your work as well.
Ashley Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 6:23 PM
A beautiful, deep and emotional write Judith escaping the smothering blanket of someone's control... both are scary, the controller and the escape.. thought-provoking content and imagery, well done!
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October 29, 2017 at 10:36 AM
Susan ... thank you so much for reading! I appreciate your recognition of the emotion that went into the write. Looking forward to catching up on your work as well. Best .... Judy
Fraser Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 11:43 AM
Wonderful flow amidst a delightful story, and a joy to read this Saturday. I haven't been around much on here, but a warm welcome from me to you, James :)
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October 29, 2017 at 10:25 AM
Thank you for your kind words and warm welcome James!!! ~Judy
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October 28, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Powerful debut poem, Judith. Absolutely stunning in it's laser perception. A lot of truthful introspection woven in the words. A soul-stirring poem. Aurora bright write. Pure poetry. Read Becca's blog. Welcome to PSoup, sis. May love light your path always.
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October 29, 2017 at 9:53 AM
Freddie ... Thank you so much for your amazing, inspirational words on my poem!! Thank you for the welcome and the wishes ... and for reading me. ~ Judy
Lamoureux Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 8:23 AM
You could be describing my dad. I left home when I was 17 and thankfully survived my childhood. Welcome to the soup. I read your comment on Becca's blog.
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October 29, 2017 at 9:51 AM
Richard ... That's very sad that you should have that experience as a child. I'm sure this shaped the person you are today. Thanks for reading ;-)
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October 20, 2017 at 2:47 PM
Never let anyone control you... Especially a narcissist... this is a deep emotive write
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October 20, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Dear Silent One. Thank you for your comments. I am becoming a huge fan or YOUR writings! Looking forward to reading more. Best, Judy
Devis Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 10:26 AM
Beautiful poem. I only saw 2 you wrote. I want more
Devis Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 11:39 PM
Great poem. I enjoyed reading it. It was vivid and intense. Would you mind critiquing mine?
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September 18, 2017 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Maurice. I will definitely take a look at your work.
Mcconnell Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 3:53 PM
Lovely penned piece Judith, this shows fine penmanship indeed, look forward to reading more from you, welcome to PS and hope you enjoy it.
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October 20, 2017 at 3:32 PM
Thank you Gordon for this long ago comment. I'm afraid I'm still getting used to this site and didn't see it.
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Great first post I see here, Judith. WElcome to Soup. I really like when people write with metaphors.
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September 18, 2017 at 12:26 PM
Thank you Andrea!!
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