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Poetry/Free Verse/ivory flakes
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Written, January 22, 2025
For the International Contest, Jasmine or Flakes
Sponsor, Ink Empress, Judged 02/04/2025

FIRST PLACE

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the snowflakes are falling like ivory lace created by God charming, creamy, soothing and precious gathering on my windows and twinkling dancing snow crystals icy tumbling, frosty, fluttering in a sweet ballet the sound a silvery melodious beat so quiet (snow drifting in gleaming piles swirling, whirling, frosty flurries oh, divine the snow blanket) pristine the ivory flakes falling in my world feathery on my hair, cheeks and lips oh, divine the frozen kiss sublime are winters butterflies

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Ann Peck

Date: 2/5/2025 10:11:00 AM

Beautiful! I love that they're "winter butterflies." Congratulations on First!

Constance La France
Date: 2/6/2025 3:21:00 PM

Ann, thank you for the compliment, and congratulations, yes, I like comparing snowflakes to winter butterflies ~

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/4/2025 8:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "ivory flakes" write. Great Picture... Love your last line. Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................

Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2025 11:46:00 AM

Paula, thank you for the congratulations, and compliment, appreciate ~

Ink Empress

Date: 2/4/2025 6:38:00 AM

Dear Constance, warrior poetess, you have written a very wintry poem for the prompt, in such a magical and picturesque manner! I love the way your poems flows so beautifully and how youv shown through your words ivory flakes! How stunning and well articulated too! I especially love the way you’ve written “ the sound a silvery melodious beat so quiet (snow drifting in gleaming piles swirling, whirling, frosty flurries oh, divine the snow blanket“ so divine and soul warming! I love it! A fave it is! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Thank you for supporting my contest

Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2025 11:48:00 AM

Ink, thank you for the contest and my amazing placement, appreciate and thanks for the lovely comment,compliment, the FAV, and congratulations, love your contests ~

Christine K Munsell

Date: 1/23/2025 6:51:00 AM

This is beautiful! "like ivory lace created by God" -- what a simile! I love it!

Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2025 4:09:00 PM

Christine, thank you for the compliment and comment, appreciate ~

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/22/2025 9:33:00 PM

Beautiful poem! "oh, divine the frozen kiss sublime are winters butterflies" very nice read! Have a nice day ~ AA

Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2025 4:10:00 PM

AA, thank you for the compliment, and comment ~

Stephan McBride

Date: 1/22/2025 5:29:00 PM

Always captivating the mind in such elegance when you write, love it, they even got snow on the beaches in the bottom of the United States yesterday, 7 inches and more in places

Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2025 4:12:00 PM

Stephan, thank you for the compliment, and comment, that's so funny that you are getting snow in the warm parts of the states, we were minus 21 today~