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. . like a famous composer tickling the ivory,

you create a timeless melody,

within me

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~ Sultry Simplicity ~

Ivory

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. . like a famous composer tickling the ivory,
           you create a timeless melody,
                                                        within me
         
   

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~ Sultry Simplicity ~

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Jared Pickett

Date: 1/18/2023 10:11:00 PM

I absolutely adore that first line! Very, very nice. Short but sweet yet tells such a big story. Hence why I enjoy the Tanka, Senryu, Haiku forms. Well written my friend! Much love Asavvy1

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/19/2023 6:10:00 PM

That first line could stand alone. Thank you, Jared. After that first thought, the words just flowed like a beautiful symphony. Sometimes, less is so much more. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Susan Lawrence

Date: 12/7/2022 6:46:00 AM

How full and intimate and deeply heartfelt dear Brandy . I love this . Such lovely power and the ability to reveal emotion in just a few words . Lovely work . Hugs and all good wishes for a healthy happy holiday season to you and yours. Susan :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/7/2022 5:54:00 PM

So kind of you to say, Susan. Tender emotions tangle within, as a soft and sensual melody plays along the wind. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Thank you. My best to you, this holiday season. Many wonderful blessings to you and yours. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/17/2022 10:25:00 AM

Yes you do Brandy, that you do, thank you for sharing, have a wonderful day full of inspired thoughts :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/18/2022 5:10:00 PM

Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Blessings truly surround me, moments of inspiration too. Thank you, Vienna. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/19/2022 11:26:00 PM

i love the color and wear it a lot, but cant help thinking of the carnage that is taking place for elephant tusks, it makes my heart bleed with sorrow. But your poem helps me think of Ivory from a different perspective. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/20/2022 7:10:00 PM

Ivory is another soothing color. I'm happy that you like wearing this color, my dear friend. Yes, it's sad what is happening to elephant tusks. Thank you Jennifer, for your kind words. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2022 3:54:00 AM

Definitely sultry. Creative work. Thanks for the visit to my blog. I have made some updates. SK

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/16/2022 9:16:00 AM

Thank you, Sara. The melody seems to linger on soft and sultry, lately. You're very welcome. Thank you for the update. I'm keeping your family in my prayers. Hugs, Brandy

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/12/2022 12:04:00 AM

Whenever this thought reminds me, your timeless melody unwinds me.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/12/2022 4:53:00 PM

Such a beautiful thing to say. Thank you. Pashang. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/9/2022 12:25:00 AM

Aw dear Brandy, how lovely your words are... You know how to create amazing verses just in two lines... How are you my friend? I have been on and off here, hardly finding time to write... Just came here to see your wonderful creations of verses... Have a blessed lovely day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/9/2022 6:56:00 PM

Dear Anitha, your kindness doesn't go unnoticed. I'm doing well, my sweet friend. Thank you for asking and for your lovely comment. Sometimes, less is more. This scribble curls around the melody of love. I know this feeling, as life comes first. Words will find you, when the time is right. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 8/4/2022 3:11:00 AM

A symphony of passion, Lovely verse Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/4/2022 12:08:00 PM

You are exactly right, Joseph. Thank you for your beautiful comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 8/3/2022 6:50:00 PM

Stunning. Memories of the past, with his touches creating a timeless carnal feeling. Many More Blessings

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/4/2022 12:08:00 PM

Such beautiful moments to embrace. This poem is filled with tenderness, love, sweet passion, and romance. Thank you, Eve. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/2/2022 10:27:00 PM

Oh, this is so good, Brandy, the poetry short, to the point, the feeling long and sensuous. I had my son take a look, his wife is an Ivory (her family name) he says 'yes know all about that') so much feeling, so much fun also. Thanks Brandy, made my day.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/3/2022 6:27:00 PM

Harry, your thoughts leave me in complete awe. There's something about saying more, with less, that is truly magical. My heart is smiling that you shared this with your son, and I can see why, with your comment. How wonderful. Your kind words caress softly around me. Thank you, my dear sweet friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Steven Young

Date: 7/28/2022 11:14:00 AM

Elegant, lustrous, little poem, smooth and shiny just like it's name. I appreciate its depth and layered meaning in so few words. Beautiful work, Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/28/2022 7:15:00 PM

Such a beautiful thing to say. Your thoughts are so soft and poetic. Like a tender melody caressing the wind, and then the skin. Thank you, Steven. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Bill Baker

Date: 7/25/2022 3:20:00 PM

You plucked the stings of my heart with your romantic poem today, Brandy. Thank you for helping me feel the love. AQ poet friend in Texas, Bill

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/26/2022 6:22:00 PM

You must enjoy romantic music being played on the piano. (Me too) The melody is simply breathtaking. You're very welcome, Bill. Thank you for bringing a smile to my heart. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/25/2022 10:12:00 AM

Wow Brandy, your romantic lines are so powerful in their ability to express in a few short words, such deep emotion!! Beautiful! Happy Monday!!!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/25/2022 8:39:00 PM

I truly appreciate the compliment, Mike. I have always enjoyed saying so much more, with less. You are able to feel the emotions within. So wonderful indeed. Happy Monday ! : ) Hugs, Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/25/2022 8:18:00 AM

So melodic and stunning piece Brandy, really loving and full of sultry tones. Trust all is good with you my dearest. blessings and hugs, Gordon

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/25/2022 8:07:00 PM

Thank you, Gordon. Soft tones linger within, with simplicity and a touch of sultry. I'm doing well. So kind of you to ask, my dear sweet friend. I hope all is well in your world. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt

Date: 7/24/2022 10:13:00 PM

The musical Brandy comes out every now and then and composes a sweet sonata such as this... I bet the Romantic composers are your favorite ;^) Thank you dear friend for your sultry simplicity and musical magic. Hugs ~ John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/25/2022 8:05:00 PM

Awe, thank you John. Such a beautiful thing to say, and I must say, you correct with your statement. Romantic composers are my favorite. :) I appreciate you and your lovely comment. I'm smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Michael Tor

Date: 7/24/2022 7:06:00 PM

I can hear the Piano sounds as those delicate keys are played. Love your comparison to the composer and the melody created in you. Lovely write Brandy. God bless you...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/24/2022 7:53:00 PM

Thank you, Michael. A soft melody is a part of me and it always will be. Your comment brings a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/23/2022 7:07:00 PM

Ivory, such a beautiful word. Piano keys, Buddhist statues, chopsticks and much more! ;)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/23/2022 8:17:00 PM

Yes, I completely agree, Anaya. Music creates a soothing, yet exciting melody. Thank you for your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 7/23/2022 9:17:00 AM

This is a beautiful thought, Brandy. May you always have a sweet melody in your heart. Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/23/2022 6:31:00 PM

Thank you, John. Magical moments and beautiful music, will always be a part of me. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy