Ive Seen Hell

I've seen hell many lights ago, the light at 
the end of the tunnel grows dimmer
 and dimmer I'm alone. 

The demons dance on my heart what 
a start I've seen hell. The bells ring
 10 times I believe, crying out for help,
 no one hears me. I've became mute
, I've seen hell. 

My dreams consist of cutting, all the 
pain I've felt came to light Satan's laughs 
as I grab the knife, I've seen hell.
 The fire grows stronger will I last much longer?  

Hell a soft ocean of loss souls with the hint 
of sadness through all this madness I 
burn with sadness; fear has cried out ,
demons shout come dance 
with me, as I weep amongst
 the trees I feel to my knees.


tears run down my eyes what a
 surprise I think I died .
I've seen souls who cried out but
 never made a sound. I've seen
 demons wearing crowns as
 all the souls bow...  With silence... 
Now frowns... I've seen hell.

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Date: 5/31/2017 3:48:00 PM
I love this line here "I've seen souls who cried out but never made a sound". Nice piece!
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Date: 9/12/2017 7:08:00 PM
Thank you soo much
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